UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

Porter · November 4, 2012, 3:33pm

So that means i can become one because i am worth everything ! (this is not a lie)(or is it? its up to you to decide)

WiReDcHiMpAnZeE · November 4, 2012, 8:12pm

I tried this game out and i loved it cant wait fornext update

TheDragon · November 5, 2012, 4:45am

@Nocturnal_Stillness oh ok i understand now…thanks for clearing things up /

Nocturnal_Stillness · November 5, 2012, 5:38am

@TheDragon always happy to discuss things. Once the first draft is done I will be asking a lot of questions of my beta testers in terms of plot and monster lore etc

100_1 · November 5, 2012, 8:40am

I just tried your game and noticed a bug. If you select the option to continue the game, and then choose “cancel”, the following error appears:

line 44: It is illegal to fall out of a *choice statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.

Otherwise, I enjoyed Unnatural a lot on my first playthrough, and immediately started a second one afterwards, to see what impact the different choices have.

I ended up with both grades at the end of the third episodes being “B” in my first game, while getting a “C” for physical, and an “A” for mental in my second.

If I can request/suggest something, the thing I’d like to see more of would be the training sessions with Ren which were briefly mentionted at one point. Maybe the chance to just talk to him/her for a bit, as well. If possible, I’d also love to see the option Ren around, even if the task he/she was created for can’t be accomplished any more.
The chance to see how Denise is doing at some later point would also be appreciated.

Anyhow, I hope you had as much fun writing this game as I had reading it.
I’m looking forward to the next update.

Nocturnal_Stillness · November 5, 2012, 9:22am

@100_1

Glad you enjoyed it. I will probably add more scenes to cover the training. There are also plans to add more Denise and Jack scenes during the 2nd draft.

And yes I always have fun writing

kaosorer · November 5, 2012, 9:34am

are we going to see golems? v. b. golems seem epic

kaosorer · November 5, 2012, 9:35am

sorry about the vb, its hard to type in my ipod with bad motorics

kaosorer · November 5, 2012, 9:38am

damn, I forgot, no questions till chapter 5

Nocturnal_Stillness · November 5, 2012, 10:27am

@kaosorer yes there will be Golems.

kaosorer · November 5, 2012, 10:29am

WOOOOOOO!!!

kaosorer · November 5, 2012, 10:39am

so, what are you planning for chapter 5

Nocturnal_Stillness · November 5, 2012, 11:19am

@kaosorer I can’t answer that it’d spoil the surprise

kaosorer · November 5, 2012, 12:13pm

Alright, can’t wait

Nocturnal_Stillness · November 5, 2012, 3:38pm

Link for new page

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural%20(Season%20One)/Unnatural/web/mygame/index.html

Zed · November 5, 2012, 3:39pm

Does the link go up to Chapter 4?

Nocturnal_Stillness · November 5, 2012, 4:04pm

@Zed it goes into Episode 4 - meeting the fae elders. By the end of the week you’ll get to see your character properly in-game

WiReDcHiMpAnZeE · November 5, 2012, 4:31pm

Cant wait for next update!!! Love the game nocturnal

100_1 · November 5, 2012, 5:11pm

@Nocturnal_Stillness

I’m glad to hear that.
“I’d also love to see the option Ren around” was supposed to read " I’d also love to see the option to keep Ren around", I somehow managed to forget the verb.

CoGAwesomeness · November 6, 2012, 12:24am

You forgot to remove the ‘Thank you for play testing’ bit at the end of chapter 3.