UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

I picked Anthony for promotion and it gave me Craig

It gave me Jack but I am in beta!

Same here even though I am a beta its been putting Jack on my team instead of Denise for the Werewolf/Lycanthrope case.

@SengokuKronos @Kuro

okay I thought I’d fixed it. The games now does two checks (whether jack/denise is alive and whether you were in alpha or beta) so to get Jack you need the variables jacklive and alpha both set to true, and to get Denise you need deniselive and beta set to true. So this should fix it.

Minor update

New title artwork drawn by @Pale_Strider

http://nocturnalstillness.com/site/?page_id=179

Looks good

@Aznxa

Thanks I think so too!

Amazing artwork!

Wow, that’s good artwork. I especially like the vampire. :smiley:

@DonkeyKong @ArchAngel950

Glad you like it @Pale_Strider is a great artist!

I’m glad you all like it, I think the werewolf is my favorite.

@Nocturnal_Stillness

What about my first post? Hehe

Quote:
1.
You just about finished getting dressed when someone knocks on your door. You open it and Craig is standing outside, he smiles when they see you. It is obvious he is excited, the sensation is almost palpable. It is an emotion you both share.

“Let’s get going, we don’t want to be late,” says Mark.

You nod and follow him out.

You reach the labs fifteen minutes later and aren’t surprised to see other members of the S.R.T are currently there.

While most of them don’t seem to stand out, one particular member does. Her pale blonde hair and lab coat both flutter in the air as she flits from desk to desk, her beauty draws sly looks from some of the male members of the Beta Unit. Noticing the two newcomers to the lab she walks over a smile on her face.

“My name is Alexandra Shara and you must be Don and Craig,” the woman says calmly.

You both nod.

… The name changes from Craig to Mark and then back to Craig although the person I met was Mark.

Unless (Since I’ve been just skipping most of the text which looks like I’ve already read except some new parts), one part I must have skipped said that all 3 of us met up?

But if there were three of us, Alexandra only mentioned me and Craig but Mark is gone. Also, quote: “You both nod.”

P.S I dunno if someone has already mentioned this.


When I asked Michael of his favourite and least favourite parts about working here:

“I love working on the experiments, it is when I can help people. My least favorite is definitelywhen we have to accompany Unit Alpha to test weapon modifications.”

definitely and when should have a space in between. Oh, and the “it is when I can help people.” would sound better if you change it is to it’s.


After I stuttered “W…What’s going on?”

“So, let me get this straight, you are going to inject her with a drug that ‘might’ cure her but also could for her to change into a ravenous beast. Force her into becoming a monster that can break free of its bonds and kill us?”

“but also could for her to change into a ravenous beast.” should be “but also could change her into a ravenous beast.”


After he administers the drug.

“Unit Alpha will clean it up we better leave them too it. You can head back to your room.”

Should be “Unit Alpha will clean it up, we better leave them to it.”


In other news, ola people, long time no see. XD

I sorted them out already? I’ll double check later.

You did? Just a sec, lemme check. This is another one btw.

@CountDon

Another what?

The quote above is a recent post which you didn’t seem to reply to so I thought you didn’t read and correct the mistakes. :slight_smile:

Sorry my apologies

A friend of mine suggested a scene with Denise but I’m unsure whether it would work I believe it could be funny if done right but could also go really wrong. so I would like some opinions.

Basically if you save her and treat her kindly, you are given a message that she wants to speak to you. so you are led to where she (or Jack if he is the one alive) stays.

Thinking she is expecting you, you enter her room. However she isn’t infact she is quite alarmed that someone has entered. As you’ll quickly learn Denise being what she is shares the same urges/desires as a wolf does. And unfortunately for you she is in ‘heat’ (if you are unfamilar with that term its supposed to be when a dog/or in this case wolf is wanting to make babies. (I think I got that right but hopefully someone will correct me if I’m wrong.) so in otherwords your shut in a room with a horny female werewolf.

So my questions are these;

  1. Would this scenario be something you’d like to see?
  2. If yes, why is that? if no, why not?
  3. If this scene was written it would play out differently depending on your gender (a heterosexual female werewolf would see a male as potential mate but would see a female as a potential rival)
  4. your general opinion on the idea (as I said earlier I think the scene could be funny if I get it right but could be bad if done wrong, I’d like to at least attempt it but still want opinions so I can tailor the scene towards being more right than wrong.)

Thank you for reading and it’ll be interesting to see what others think of my friend’s scenario.

Yes
I am a huge werewolf fan so this would seem like fun
It will only make sence
You get biten!

1)Yes
2)Seems like an interesting scene( tho I’am a huge vampire fan and would like to see vampire friendly scenarios more.)
3)Like Zach said it would only make sense
4)I’d prefer a more serious atmosphere in the scene than comedic; also wolves tend to mate for life so say if u did this sense and the MC ended up mating with her then wouldn’t make sense that afterward she gets a hold of herself then the MC and Denise have a serious talk about what happened, what relationship will they have(if they will have one, you know just the standard awkward moment after two ppl have sex and don’t know if it will blossom into a relationship or is just a one night thing.