link for new page
It wonāt let me play the demo from that page. It said there was an unexpected line or string or something.
The only problems I have so far is things just donāt seem to flow for me, especially in dialogue, and quite a few grammar and spelling errors. If youād like help with the latter, I could offer my services.
Other than that, I really like it. Iām a sucker for vampires and werewolves (unless itās Twilight). 
Strange it works for me.
If you spot any grammar/spelling errors please tell me. I wish notepad had a spell check it would make it so much easier. Its also hard due to the fact as Iām writing the story in america Iām trying to write using the american spelling of words ie center instead of centre.
@NS
*Shrug* Is the first postās link updated along with it? That one works fine for me.
I donāt think anyone would care too much about that, so long as they know what you mean (āarmorā and āarmourā and such).
Thereās quite a few. If you have Word, you could type up the basic body of text in that, then copy/paste it into Notepad and add the coding in around it.
I can send you a list in a PM, if you want.
Yes please if you donāt mind. Iāll try writing in word then copy pasting it into notepad see if that helps.
Or you could copy it from notepad into something with a spell checks just to see which words you got wrong then correct them by hand, though I suppose that might be a painā¦ But it would at least help you find grammar errors and words you spelled as other words where just a single quick spell check wouldnāt.
new page wont let me play the demo i get the same error archangel got
out of curiosity what are you using to play the game?
Because when I click on the link (using my pc and firefox) it loads fine?
Iām using Explorer. Iāll download Firefox and try it there.
Just tried it in explorer and got the error message so it looks like something has changed that conflicts with windows explorer very odd as it works with chrome or firefox
Iāve managed to get the game working on Explorer so can you try it again please
Yes, it works in Explorer now. Iām playing it with Firefox, though, since Iām already pretty far in.
Thanks very much. 
Iām going through your suggestions right now
Excellent.
Found another error. During Case A, I shot the small werewolf with silver bullets from my SIG, and tried to stab him with a Form sword, but an error box came up.
Can you remember what your firearms stat was by any chance?
itās okay I spotted the error should be fixed now
No, I canāt. Sorry. It said I hit him, but that it didnāt work.
thanks anyway I thought it might be due to an choice that depends on your firearm stat but it was a missing label that was the error!
Ah. Well, it was fixed. Thatās the important part.
Found two more errors. ^^;
After you get punched in the gut by Sarah near the beginning, both the āRun for itā and āWalk for itā choices are broken.