@Zach Um… I don’t think the MRU are “lolevil”… they’re fighting to protect sentient beings who the world views as monsters. They probably wouldn’t help you kill everyone in the SRT. Then again maybe I’m wrong and they’re even worse than the corrupt organization they claim to be fighting. It would kind of fit for Victoria to be a member either way.
I now but I want S.R.T. dead MONSTERS HAVE RIGHTS
The M.R.U are fighting for the rights of monsters they won’t help you kill members of the S.R.T. However I do need to point out Victoria isn’t a member of the M.R.U.
Best way I can put it currently (considering most of the story is still in my head and not set in stone)
M.R.U are a morally ‘Good’ organisation, they believe ALL monsters deserve the right to a fair trial/treatment. They are also fairly new, when introduced in Episode four they will have only been active a couple of months,
S.R.T. aren’t corrupt in the way I fear I’m making them sound. They were created in response to a large rise of murders/massacres caused by monsters (which skyrocket after Case Zero) the majority of the American population just see the monsters as evil who steal their loved ones away. So most of the S.R.T. join because they have lost someone they hold dear, some of them join because they want to stop people experiencing the loss they themselves have felt (David). Others join because they want to cure monsters (Alexandra) others joined because they just feel monsters should die Victor) I’m hoping to allow the player to define why they joined through their actions.
Victoria’s group are the bad ones, they are kind of like M.R.U. but they believe monsters are superior to mankind
Were-bunnies are still here, we are superior! >:)
Usagi !_!
WAIT VICTORIA IS A MONSTER.One that has not came into the light yet UNTIL NOW is this good?
Victoria isn’t a monster in that sense. She just belongs to a group that believes that humanity should be sub-servient to them.
It was a idea nothing more(I think she will be a monster-maybe-if her groups plans work)
who knows what’ll come out of my head? lol
Currently working on Episode 2
so far added revised monster lore available via a new set of choices.
Hm, looks like someone needs to teach her a little self respect!
I still really like S.R.T I totally get it. They are like the police team, but for the super/unnatural I respect that. I totally get M.R.U’s point of view to- they make me think of lawyers- they want rights and equal treatment of monsters, but I do think certain monsters are still super dangerous and you need S.R.T to keep people safe.
In the beggining it asks you if you want to be freinds again or not, that would imply that you were friends before, I just noticed this.
You were friends with Craig/Alice in Junior High, it is only in High School they start to bully you (because of family issues)
Did you read person?It said it.
I didn’t see that sorry, (my computer’s mouse is over sensitive) the only other problem I saw was a lack of quotations at certain points.
If you spot anything like that please let me know.
That’t enough for tonight
here is what I’ve done so far
link: http://nocturnalstillness.com/site/?page_id=179
Comments on the scene with Denise at the very end of the demo would be appreciated. Was hard to right and I’m unsure if it suits the game or not.
Either way enjoy.
“What about vampires or werewolves made “docile”, you could work with them in Gamma.”
Seconded. Sorry for late response.
Hm, it doesn’t tell you about your third option when you choose what you learned in college.
The scene first scene with Denise makes a lot more sense than it used to, though there are still some holes in it that leave it seeming pretty morally questionable. If they already know the chains won’t hold her then when don’t they get stronger chains? And for that matter, why don’t they lock her in a secure room and administer the cure with a robot arm? That way nobody has to die… I suppose in the end you do need to leave some things up to dramatic license, but it always bugs me when elite military forces in fiction fail to come up with such an obvious solution. I guess it would drain the drama out of it…
I don’t have much to say about the scene with Denise at the end… There hasn’t really any interaction yet… Unless I missed it due to the bug I got when I asked her what else she could sense:
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I don’t know about the scene with Denise it just doesn’t seem to fit in my personal opinion. It kinda felt like it was just thrown in and i’m not sure why it was in. Maybe if it shows up later on, but where it is right now seems forced. But the writing wasn’t bad. 
yup and there is an error.
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