UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

@Nocturnal_stillness will there be a way to go on a date with Denise after the mru mission or witch way?

@Peeehh

There will be an epilogue scene with her.

@trollhunter

I just played through and I was able to access to Victor romance just fine.

@NS

Two things: in “7500”, if the MRU person takes control of the plane, “then I’ll take you down” isn’t in italics (the code is showing through).

When looking at the romance guide, a back button would be nice.

@WolfieGrey

Thanks I’ll fix that.

@everyone

Been working hard on the M.R.U path and got some fun fight scenes coded so far (ones affected by your humanity AND whether you trained or not).

Latest word count for Unnatural is…

175,320 words

Still to do is write the last two fight scenes, write the Alex path then work on the endings. I’m sure I can get it done by the end of next week but it might take a bit longer got a few longer shifts at work and am working this saturday which can eat into my writing time.

link for the new page…

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/82599458/Unnatural/Season%20One/web/mygame/index.html

@Nocturnal_Stillness

Honestly, it’s really hard to choose. I keep saves on all three slots, the first of the current route I’m taking, and the second is a Shade choice, and the third a fresh Azure choice.

Whenever I come to a bad end or unwanted conclusion, whether it be death or something else, I restart the game and load the opposite save. For example, I would load Shade if Azure didn’t work out, vice versa.

So far, it’s like, a 50.1% on Azure and 49.9% on Shade, so I’d have to go with Azure, if I could only play the game one more time. The percentage sometimes fluctuates, though.

Quick question- Would attempting to romance two characters at once stop the romance starting completely? Cause, to be honest, I followed the guideline for Craig, as well as Lakota because I decided I liked him more, (though in the guideline it mentioned camping? Which I never came across), but the scene after the first mission never came up… so… Yeah…

@Nocturnal_Stillness
Q: Why is the Beta MC confused,freaking out or feigning ignorance about test subjects? They read the emails which talked about testing specifically the project 558 email.
**project 558. Unit Alpha has acquired a confirmed werewolf. The subject was captured while in human form and we currently have her contained in test area A56. We are commencing tests on her tomorrow. Our purpose is to define what causes the change and cure it. This will be attempt 2057 in providing a cure. All previous test subjects died during experiments.
***“W…what is going on?” you stutter, trying to make sense of what is going on.“Calm down Willow, the young lady is Denise Dixon. She is a werewolf and our test subject.” “Test subject?” you say alarmed. You spend the next hour trying to think about what happened. You didn’t know the S.R.T. was testing cures on test subjects…

Q: Why is the Beta MC confused or feigning ignorance with Lakota? They should remember the email and know who he is…Or at least I would think the Beta MC would say something like: “oh, YOU are L. Black from project 457!”
*“I’m here for the same reason you are,” Lakota says softly, “What do you mean?” “He is a fae,” whispers Ren, “he must be the reason the S.R.T. knew that sigil.” “I don’t know what you mean,” you say,“You’re a monster too right?” Lakota asks,
*TO All Beta Staff FROM Dr. Michaels SUBJECT Project 457 results. Project 457 is considered a success. All tests on subject L.BLACK came back positive. Fairy blood confirmed, Dr. Shara’s theory on fairies being both genders now confirmed. Dr. Sakura requests that subject be released into Unit Gamma to test ability of teams to work with “UNNATURALS”. Although Dr. Shara suggests keeping the truth about L.BLACK’s condition from fellow S.R.T members to prevent any “accidents”.

Q: And along that same line, wouldn’t the Beta MC also bring up L. Black or “project 457” with Arthur too remembering the email that said they wanted to see how unnaturals work within the team? Or What about giving the Beta MC the option of asking or not?
*Arthur smiles, “Of course not. I am officially promoting you to Unit Gamma.”“What did you say?” “The moment you leave my office you are a part of Unit Gamma. You may go and continue your recovery. I am looking forward to seeing how well you do against monsters.”

Sorry @Nocturnal_Stillness, I was past my edit time.

Typos:
The Government were (*was) happy for them to assume care of you, as long as they agreed to send you to the occassional psych interview to make sure you were dealing with the trauma okay. It was annoying at first, but you eventually got used to it and after two years of them. The doctors were convinced you (*your) mental health was good enough to cease the interviews.

“Forgive me, we’ll take it to the elders (*add to or and) see if they can tell you what it says.”

You hold out your hand and the blade of light forms as one of your wings disapates (*dissipates) You strike quick and true, the blade piercing her heart with ease.

Slipping, you flail your arms and you feel the bullet whizz (*whiz)over your head. You look at the gun again and notice the silencer attached to it.

You throw yourself at her, a move she didn’t anticpate (*anticipate). Her surprise and your speed mean (*means) you tackle her before she can get a bead on you.

Romance Guide typos:
Denise: Make sure your Mental stats is higher than you (*your) Physical stat or at least equal to it (and choose to go to Beta.)
When you are asked to help adminster (*administer)the cure to Denise…
Lakota: When he introduces himself shake him (*his) hand.

Question plus typos:
Q: This wouldn’t be a surprise because I already saw this when I killed before namely, I killed Zoey first:
*You smile as you pull the blade free letting it dissapate (*dissipate)into the air. Gabriel slumps even more as his eyes finally dim. Heading for the door, you pause when something catches your eyes. You turn and frown as you see something glowing near Gabriel’s body. You reach out and as soon as your fingers wrap around it images suddenly flash through your mind. In an instance, you see Father Gabriel’s entire life flow right through you. You realize that you have his soul in your hands. Lakota pops into the back of your mind and you remember him telling you (*add about) the azure being the sheperds (*shepherds) of souls. You get the feeling that you should let it float away…

@Babisko

no one romance shouldn’t stop another. Lakota should offer to take you camping in Episode 5

@piggleywinks

Thanks I’ll fix them later.

I think an easy way to fix the “L. Black” section, is when meeting him, if beta have an “his name sounds familer but you can’t quite remember where from” or something like that

I fixed it by changing L.BLACK to LB4271 in the email much easier lol

Question for you all.

At the moment if you die prior to the ending the game just ends and you get the play again button. Would you prefer for the game to just skip to the achievement page so even if you die in an earlier episode you’d still get to see what achievements you got.

yes

Yup

Yes sir

I guess I’ll be the odd one out and say no. Most of the achievements you get just by beating a chapter, or case. Then again, if I had my way they wouldn’t be in there at all.

Hey NS I followed the guide to be able to romance Lakota yet when it was a time for his scene to come up with going camping with him, it just skipped the scene

Just tried it out and got the Kota romance and camping scene

I intend to have 5 achievements per episode.

in regards to LIs I’ll look into rewriting the guide to make it clearer.

Yes