Okay maybe I forgot how much rep one needs, I had 10 rep, so I did the golem case first, then the airport case, I disarmed Scarlet in the spar and nothing happened.
If that’s not supposed to happen then there was a glitch somewhere.
Port, willpower is your resistance against your mind being controlled: ghostly possession, mind control spells, that sort of thing.
I don’t think NS has coded many options when you use it so far though.
Got an error after ‘by tooth and claw’
line 2978: invalid expression at char 47, expect closing parenthesis, was: BOOLEAN_OPERATOR [and]
@P0RT3R
stsword is correct at the moment the only current part of the game will affects is the ghost case (I keep meaning to add more checks for it but its on my to do list).
that error is fixed.
I’ll pm you the checks that determine the Scarlet romance scene.
“I am impressed you were able to eliminate both the werewolf and the lycanthrope as well as bringing Jack back safely. You did well.” (as well as bring Jack back safely)
No, they will be working with me. I want to be honest." (telling people your unnatural)
it is a silver-plated Desert Eagle .50 calibre magnum. carved into the barrel. (whats carved into the barrel. Also should it not be magnum, carved into the barrel)
The “school daze” case only has the accept button. You can’t decline it.
Don’t know if this was supposed to happen, but first time I could use the D.E was the school daze case. Also, will the other guns accept .50 Cal rounds?
double check the Desert Eagle is loaded with Magnum before slipping it into the hip holster. (Magnum rounds? I don’t know it just doesn’t seem right)
Heading to the garage and Ashley jumps into the driver’s seat. (you head to the garage and Ash jumps in the drivers seat. OR, heading to the garage, ash jumps into the drivers seat)
A few days after out fortnightly trips to a camp we own just outside Georgia. (our fortnightly trips)
"Apart from the fact that Tim was one of our brightest students not to mention a shy one. It took us ages to get him to even go on this trip. (shy one, it took us)
“Don’t mess with a cheerleader unless you’re a sports star,” she replies, (full stop)
(“How did you know the girl involved was a cheerleader?” the Dean asks, “I never mentioned that part.”
“I used to go here sir, the cheerleaders always had the prettiest girls.”) (the cheerleaders had the prettiest girls? Do you mean “the cheerleaders were always the prettiest girls?” took me a few moments to understand that.)
“Hope Mr. Nash spoke of me fondly,” Ashley says smiling, (full stop)
“Tomorrow actually, you should go and make sure everything is packed ready for a trip.” (That line just doesn’t sound right to me. Then again, its probably just me)
The next day you find yourself sharing a cabin with Ashley as the camp. (at the camp?)
(“That looks like a sword?” you say outloud,
“Looks like a badly drawn one to me,” Ashley replies,) (full stop, full stop)
“That looks like a flower?” you say outloud, (full stop)
“That looks like a tree?” you say outloud, (full stop)
I hope every time I say full stop I’m right, or I’m going to look quite the fool.
(“Who will cook the food?” Ashley asks,
“One of the teachers will be the chef,” you reply, ) (Stop, stop)
“I don’t recognise any of these from when I was in high school. Do you know who they are?” Ashley asks. “Do you know who they are?” Ashley asks. (recognize (different culture). She repeats, “Do you know who they are?”)
James Matherson: and generally was quite liked by teacher and student alike. (teachers and students)
In fact according to the background check he’d been forced to leave his last teaching job due to one of his class trying it on with him. (In fact, according to…) (“his class trying it on with him”. There are better ways to word that)
The chef one is the only one I didn’t change as far as i can remember speech goes lure this…
“WolfieGrey helped me,” Matt said.
“WolfieGrey helped.”
So its a comma if text follows it (he said she said etc).
I also thought it was a comma after he said she said if speech followed it ie
“Matt you’re writing too slow,” WolfieGrey muttered loudly,
“I’m going as fast as I can,” replied Matt,
“Well write faster.”
But its been AGES since I went to an English class so I might have forgotten so I changed the last commas to full stops.
Yeah I thought if it started on a new line it was a capital. But the English language is a difficult one to write correctly.
progress report.
I should have “Fangs for the memory” finished by Sunday evening.
Then all that is left is four more cases and then the final stretch.
Once the first draft is done, I will go and sort out the remaining romance scenes. Then will have a closed beta test (while a version will remain online, the beta test will have a different link and anyone chosen for the beta will be given a new game plus code for their effort and hard work. (Please note the current codes will not work in the final game.
I’m always here to beta test.
It won’t be a game breaking boost. I’m currently leaning towards a choice of a 5% boost to either Physical/Mental/Will or a +1 to all monster lore
UPDATE!!
Details as always are available via the updates option in-game.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/82599458/Unnatural/Season%20One/web/mygame/index.html
+1 to all monster lore sounds nice. It’s just an increase on the +1 I normally use anyway
everyone “Fangs for the memory” has a lot of conditions and *if codes in it. So I’m expecting a few errors to be reported.
yeah I was quite impressed with your build when I tested it.
@NS
Why thank you 
Take LIs for a few additional lines in “Fangs for the memories”
Hmm, I just noticed that when I completed sticks and stones, I had rep 11, when I did the summer camp case I had rep 10.
Now maybe it’s just me, but don’t you guys think that SRT would be more impressed by the PC killing a supposedly extinct, mind controlling unnatural and discovering evidence of a rival monster hunting organization, than by managing to not shoot an animals wrong group?
I mean unless the world of unnatural is far more crapsack than it seems, not shooting relatively peaceful protesters kind of goes without saying.Got an error when trying “Fangs for the memories”
line 1219: Invalid string, open quote with no close quote: "${friend})
It depends on the POV.
On one hand you can kill/not kill a succubus but either way you are knocked out and the body has been taken.
On the other you are dealing with a group that is trying to shut the srt down. Being violent just gives them more ammo against you.
@greyjoy will fix that later.