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I’m really glad the PC’s age was brought up. It was a point that I always wanted to make but it always slipped my mind.

Since the game is set in New York it feels a bit odd going with the schooling system from the UK. I think you should probably boost the PCs age up a little to where they’re 17 or 18 heading to university/college.

Same with the School Daze case. Instead of having them be college students make them high school seniors prepping for post-secondary education, perhaps at a private school. In the US college is pretty much the same as university so it seemed a bit strange to have a bunch of ‘college’ students needing to be escorted by teachers while camping when they should have been in their early twenties at least. Them being high school seniors would make a lot more sense.

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@Nocturnal_Stillness Your memories of when your family died do not match up, in the first one your dad said something like “Find your brother, your mom will stall them you just find Alex” buut in the rest of them he says “Save your brother”.

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D’oh!!

Forgot bout the recurring dream.

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just fixed the dreams, they now should ALL say “find your brother…”

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@Nocturnal_Stillness

“Craig reveals that he got into New York Technical”, cheated to get into Washington, after choosing the three books I got this line: “Together with Craig you find your renewed friendship has made college life much more fun” (he got into NYT. He’s in every other scene up till I choose who to give to promote)

Seems like Washington is the best school to get into, in terms of *experience*. (the shooting, melee training, or studying) compared to NYT (the hardest to get into, soccer). Why is that?

“you also see your bookmarked link to case zero” (next scene says its up due to recent searches, not the bookmark)

Something that always bugged me, how come nobody ever questions you or your abilities when they witness them? I know one time I played through and told everyone I was Unnatural and someone shot me, but other than that, nobody cares I can create blades of light or shoot blasts out of my hands.

Taking the person hostage (in the hospital) “are there anyone else here to kill me” (is there anyone else)

Jack says there are two lycanthropes about, as far as I can tell, there is only the one.

You go to check for a new case but find out someone else has done the remaining case. (there were two other cases. School Daze and Trick or Treat)

Didn’t take the guard down, golem was taken down by the “loud bang” of the anti-material rifle. Unless I missed it, there was no scene in which your partner was waiting for you with the rifle.

7500: on the plane, can read the newspaper as much as you want

again, have to bring up the sound of fighting when your a kid, which you somehow don’t hear

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Wolfie, who would freak out on the PC? The SRT all think he’s a project guardian supersoldier, the only one I can recall witnessing the use of powers who isn’t SRT is the guide in the werewolf case, who is either busy being killed by a werewolf, or a werewolf themselves.

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Sword well for starters, if you tell them your an unnatural in the meeting they all try to shoot you, then Austin kills you. Also, the “project guardian” never came up when talking with any. Wouldn’t they be suspicious when they see you switch from shade to azure? Or sus in the least? I’m pretty sure Lakota is keeping the fact he his Fae a secret from the others.

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@WolfieGrey

Each college offers an increase in mental and NYT offers the highest increase.

I’ll fix the college and dream issues.

In regards to “by tooth and claw” I’m sure Jack says two lycans but then corrects himself.

The S.R.T. All believe (except Lakota) that the MCs powers are from project guardian revealing your a monster scares some of them into shooting you. As for no one batting an eyelid in regards to the azure change, have you tried to romance Scarlet with an azure MC?

I’ll make sure the other characters react to in some way.

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@WolfieGrey

Each college offers an increase in mental and NYT offers the highest increase.

I’ll fix the college and dream issues.

In regards to “by tooth and claw” I’m sure Jack says two lycans but then corrects himself.

The S.R.T. All believe (except Lakota) that the MCs powers are from project guardian revealing your a monster scares some of them into shooting you. As for no one batting an eyelid in regards to the azure change, have you tried to romance Scarlet with an azure MC?

I’ll make sure the other characters react to in some way.

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A message besides the new story reveals this link was suggested due to previous searches (Case Zero…) (really a bookmarked link. Re mentioning in case you forgot)

Thanks, did the others make it?" (missing beginning speech mark)

Are there anyone else here to kill me? (is there anyone else. Again not sure if you noticed it or not)

“She hired him to help smuggle a gun into a hospital.” (into THE hospital)

With the “I dont think they are both lycanthropes” he says that if you go to the second place. I just went to the first one then headed north.

"I’ll tell you later if we have time, let’s go find Jack. (missing the ending speech mark. Austin)

When with Jack (tooth & claw) when going north to the camp, how come you can only ask one question?

If you brake Max’s arm, is it still broken in the future scene with him?

"The blunt question catches you by surprise and you hesitate. Scarlet was definately one of the prettier women in the S.R.T. and one of the ones you most heard most of the male members talk about. However, she also seemed to be inebriated,

The blunt question catches you by surprise, you hesitate. She was definitely one of the prettier woman in the S.R.T. but she also seemed to be inebriated. Before you can respond she cuts you off. " (it repeats itself)

Is Jack or the werewolf girl going to make another appearance?

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@WolfieGrey

I’ll add them to my error list.

Yes Jack/Denise will be back if they are alive in episode 6.

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If Denise is a lycan what is putting her in a cell with silver bars going to do?

“I would like to say you did well, but I cannot. The team sent to pick up the werewolf you captured were found butchered half way on their journey to base. It appears the ‘werewolf’ was actually a lycanthrope. Your mistake has cost good people their lives…” (I always get this whenever I create a wall. Is that supposed to happen?)

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@WolfieGrey

At the time of her capture they assume she is just a werewolf.

The team getting butchered happens if Jack/Denise don’t correct themselves.

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Did you ever decide on a release format/time?
I know you were discussing it a few pages back (free chapters/paid chapters/paid version/free version etc.)

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@CJW

I’ve settled on releasing episodes 1-3 for free then charging 99p for episodes 4-6.

As for release date I wanted to be doing final beta testing this month but writers block messed that up. I’m trying to get the first draft done by the end of this month then will hold an open and closed beta test during May.

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Sounds good to me, I assume that’s 99p each, not for all three?

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99p for all 3 i was thinking.

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Can you buy this game on the app store?!?! if so that would be amazing :smiley:

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@charlotteXrules

Not yet but you will be once I’ve got it finished.

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@everyone

What is your opinion about the three styles of Shade? Do you think they all work well within the universe? I ask because I am considering revising them. In my mind I can explain how form works (using power to create from shadows) I can explain how cloak works (using shadows to cover the body) but not how it makes you invisible, yet I can’t explain how focus works. This is an issue as I want Unnatural to be realistic within its universe.

I’m starting to write the revenge path Sunday. Then will work on the cases for the first half of Episode 6.