Fixed.
I’d say 50% geninue mistakes, 50% errors caused during edited earlier scenes.
@MIGhunter
Fixed, I’d forgotten humanity wasn’t set using %s due to it causing errors.
Update!! [See the update section of the game for details.]
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https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural/Season%20One/web/mygame/index.html
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On a more epic note 4000 posts! Thank you all SO much for being such great fans and for showing interest in the world of Unnatural.
In ‘Creepy Statues’, when you examine the destroyed gargoyle, it says ‘correction’ when I assume you mean ‘collection’
Thanks fixed now.
I should finally be able to continue with episode 6.
Question is what should I write first the ‘revenge’ path or the first lot of cases?
Revenge definitely
Rrvenge
‘I’d say 50% *genuine* mistakes…’
Also, what do you mean by the revenge path? :3
*Insert awkward ‘Under my clothes, I’m naked’ smiling face here*
Oooh, also, will we be able to date Victor? :3
@CountDon
The revenge path involves you going after the group that killed your family
I got an error while talking to Irene, when asking about the trip itself.
Oh and when I suspect Irene I ask if Catherine is the culprit, admittedly my other prime suspect but that question doesn’t really make sense.
Huh just had this weird issue with the saving system, I tried to restart my game in season five and it took me to the beginning of the game.
@stsword Had that save issue too. Repeatedly tried to load and it finally worked.
@WolfieGrey Group? :3 *Insert a stupid looking meme face here*
@NS
Dad tells us to “save your brother”. We’re 8 years old, most likely going up against a vamp or werewolf. What does he expect us to do?
If there was a struggle, which there must have been since mum died and she had that endurance power, why didn’t we hear it?
When you awake from the nightmare for the first time, it says 7 years have passed. That would make the MC 15. I don’t know many 15 year olds that get into Uni. (unless I’m missing something)
“Okay, you have thirty minutes to answer all the questions. You may begin,” Miss Stone says firmly. (“You may begin” should end in a full stop)
Craig says he will leave you alone. The game says weeks pass and you don’t have any issues with him. Then when you decide if you help him study or not the option is: “I can help maybe he will leave me alone then” even though he has been leaving you alone
That philosophy scene on the train is useless… isn’t it? Why is it still in there? I’m not sure your target audience is going to know what they are, or bother looking it up on google only to find it has no meaning. Correct me if I’m wrong.
When you get to Uni, after you choose the three books you want to read, it says two years pass. The next scene then says “Just before your last week of the first year of college…” Is this supposed to be a time travel scene?
I see a lot of “it is” used. In some scenes “it’s” would make more sense for speaking. E.G. “Aunt, it is WolfieGrey I got uncle’s letter, what did the police want?”
“…They are designed firstly to see if you are right for us and also to see what you are best suited for.” (to see what unit you are best suited for?)
When checking the “latest news” before you video call your Aunt and Uncle, one of the options are “WolfeGrey family murdered”. That’s not exactly the latest news.
“A message besides the new story reveals this link was suggested due to previous searches (Case Zero…)” (A message *beside* the *news* story…)
“The N.Y.P.D were called to a residence early this morning, after neighbours called 911 after hearing the sound of violence and screams coming from one of the houses.” (Once again, violence and screams which we didn’t notice)
“found the door smashed in” (I assume this is how the creature entered and killed good old Pa. Again we didn’t hear it) “They found Mrs. WolfieGrey and a currently unnamed boy in the dining room. They were also killed in the same way as Mr. WolfieGrey.” (Wasn’t Alex down the hall? Did mum steal our wing, lock us in the cupboard, and then go into the dining room?)
“You wake up with your alarm.” (wake up *to* your alarm)
“Monster Class C weak or harmless” (Class A,B,C: Weak or harmless. Same with ROE)
Zombies: ROE: Capture if possible (you want to capture the reanimated corpse? Or the animator?)
“So how much you think you can lift?” Dominic asks? (the rest of the scene where you tell him is taken out. Or was that on purpose? Also, the scene before says you’ve been at basic training for a few weeks already, so why is he acting like he only just met you? “oh hey you must be WolfieGrey”
And that’s all for now.
Edit: @CountDon
Yeah the group that released the monsters on your family. Your dad tells you about them in some ritual
Edit2: @NS
When speaking to your dad, some questions should be locked until you ask a certain question e.g. The first question you can ask is “whats stopping them from coming back and finishing off the job” or something along those lines
Dad tells us to "save your brother". We're 8 years old, most likely going up against a vamp or werewolf. What does he expect us to do?
Good points, I’ll have to reword it. Your dad just wants you to get Alex out of there hopefully while your mom is distracting the monster (which as you know didn’t happen).
If there was a struggle, which there must have been since mum died and she had that endurance power, why didn't we hear it?
"The N.Y.P.D were called to a residence early this morning, after neighbours called 911 after hearing the sound of violence and screams coming from one of the houses." (Once again, violence and screams which we didn't notice)
"found the door smashed in" (I assume this is how the creature entered and killed good old Pa. Again we didn't hear it) "They found Mrs. WolfieGrey and a currently unnamed boy in the dining room. They were also killed in the same way as Mr. WolfieGrey." (Wasn't Alex down the hall? Did mum steal our wing, lock us in the cupboard, and then go into the dining room?)
More good points, I’ll work them into the story.
When you awake from the nightmare for the first time, it says 7 years have passed. That would make the MC 15. I don't know many 15 year olds that get into Uni. (unless I'm missing something)
When you first wake up from the nightmare you’re still in High School (specifically the end of High School where the 15 comes into play.)
Craig says he will leave you alone. The game says weeks pass and you don't have any issues with him. Then when you decide if you help him study or not the option is: "I can help maybe he will leave me alone then" even though he has been leaving you alone,
I’ll need to fix that as that’s an inconsistency.
That philosophy scene on the train is useless.... isn't it? Why is it still in there? I'm not sure your target audience is going to know what they are, or bother looking it up on google only to find it has no meaning. Correct me if I'm wrong.
I’ll remove it, I only left it in hoping I’d think of a way to get the two morality stats into the game but failed.
When you get to Uni, after you choose the three books you want to read, it says two years pass. The next scene then says "Just before your last week of the first year of college..." Is this supposed to be a time travel scene?
I’ll reword it, I’ll need to go through the timeline to make sure all dates/events are consistent.
When checking the "latest news" before you video call your Aunt and Uncle, one of the options are "WolfeGrey family murdered". That's not exactly the latest news.
No its not, I’ll reword it as it was meant to be a story that pops up in your newsfeed because of earlier searches.
Zombies: ROE: Capture if possible (you want to capture the reanimated corpse? Or the animator?)
Animator I’ll reword it.
"So how much you think you can lift?" Dominic asks? (the rest of the scene where you tell him is taken out. Or was that on purpose? Also, the scene before says you've been at basic training for a few weeks already, so why is he acting like he only just met you? "oh hey you must be WolfieGrey"
Hmm it shouldn’t miss it, I’ll look into that and anything else I’ve yet to mention.
@Nocturnal_Stillness In ‘Tooth and Claw’ (Denise) I choose to shoot the brown furred wolf yet it says I shot the red furred one.
when you choose to shoot a wolf, your stats decide whether you actually hit who you’ve aimed at.
@NS
What age does American highschool end? Even if its the end of highschool, and the 6 months pass, that’s still 16. It might be different there but our uni starts at 19 (or whenever if you don’t want to go)
I’m in the UK I’m assuming American college is available after high school like here.
Your college is year 11-12 right? And then you can go to university? American highschool is year 7-12 (I think) and they call university college for some strange reason
Highschool in the US- grades 9-12. I would know because I go to highschool in the United States.
@cloudian
At what age does American highschool end? I assume its 18 like most other places
@WolfieGrey Well it depends on an indivuals birth date and whether or not they got held back a year. But 21 is the max age for a person to attend high-school with the rest of the student body. Once a person is 21+ and still hasn’t graduate or came back to finish high school then they would go to a special room separated from the main high-school building, where all the adults are taught. I personally have a friend who is a freshman(9th grade) and is 16, he is older than me even though I am a Sophomore(10th grade), and is almost 17, so he will be 18 when he is a Junior(11th grade), he was held back in the 2nd grade.