UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

@WolfieGrey

You need 50 or higher form to best the golem.

@CountDon
There you go, you need 50 or higher form, or azure powers

I do intend to still write in a non power way to beat the Golem as it does say the Golem is weaker than a normal one.

And it’s not fair for those who don’t want to use form

@WolfieGrey

I agree the shade options were easier to pass originally. But when I added the non power choice it caused the game to crash.

Just done the talk to teacher scene. Will be starting the monster hunting part tomorrow. Then will add a choice to take out the Golem without powers.

Just a question I am thinking about offering two different ways depending on your former unit ie Alpha you use a anti-tank rifle, but beta you use a chemical. Would that be good?

@NS
Will the Anti-Tank rifle cause an explosion or be really loud? Because that mission was supposed to be covert. Unless you knock the guard out.

Good point, I’ll look into that.

EDIT:

Nope, you can’t silence an anti-material rifle, and watching a video on youtube of one being fired and it would definately be too loud.

This is a dilema as you point out the mission is supposed to be covert. Yet the two methods capable of dealing damage (anti-material rifle and explosives) both would reveal your location instantly which would be bad for the S.R.T. At least with a chemical it could just melt rock which would be quiet. I suppose I could just use a standard sniper rifle loaded with specially made anti-material rounds

Well with cloak anyway you could disappear afterwards, but even then it’s less stealthy than would be desired.

@Nocturnal_Stillness

Here is a link you may find helpful for either the chemical concoction or hollow bullets with the chemicals inside.

http://answers.google.com/answers/threadview/id/354284.html

@Nocturnal_Stillness
Did you fix the grammar mistakes and the error I received? :3

“14. Error during the Dr. Sergei mission after I go through the WATER tunnels and find him and try to talk to him: line 525: Expected option starting with #”

@CountDon

Yes I did sorry forgot to post bout it.

  1. When I read newspapers on the airplane for the gremlin mission:
    The defendant had been brough back and set upon someone.

‘The defendant had been *brought* back and set upon someone.’

  1. When I visit my Uncle and Aunt and he give me the letter: Your mom wanted me to tell you everything in this letter but I have been a better idea. Follow the ritual on the the opposite side of the letter. I have look forward to seeing you again.
    Love Dad

‘but I *had* a better idea.’ ‘I *look* forward to seeing you again.’ ‘*Love, dad.*’

  1. When doing the ritual: “We meet again my son,” you hear your father’s voice from all around you."

‘…from all around *you.*’

@CountDon

Fixed.

Hey NS, there is an error when after choosing the azure side

  1. Restarted cause I’m bored. When Craig asks you to be a replacement for the soccer team in college: You sit there thinking, it was true you used to play but you didn’t apply for the college team as you wanted to focus on your study.

‘…as you wanted to focus on your *studies*.’

  1. The description of Partner in stats:
    Partner
    Who your current partner

'*Who your current partner is*"

or

‘*Who’s/Who is your current partner*’

  1. When you follow Craig to see Peter:
    “You better leave now, forget what you saw just. It’ll be better for you.”

‘… what you *just saw*.’

  1. Meeting Ren again with a shotgun and I ‘killed’ him:
    Whoever he was, there no longer a threat to you. You drop the empty shotgun and walk away.

‘Whoever he was, *he’s/he is* no longer a threat to you.’

@MIGhunter

What was the error?

@CountDon

fixed them, thanks for the typo spotting!

link for new page:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural/Season%20One/web/mygame/index.html

  1. For the first mission we can pick as Gamma members: “We should camp here the night, we won’t help her tired,” says Victor

’ “We should camp here *for the* night, we won’t help *if we’re* tired,” says *Victor.*’

  1. When Victor was going to throw a molotov at the sleeping vampire for the S.O.S mission: “Don’t!” you reach out to stop him but Victor steps out your reach before tossing the Molotov at the bundle of rags.

‘…but Victor steps *out of* your reach…’

wow @CountDon you’ve spotted 23 typos! Like, wow! You must have a hawk’s eye!

I like scythes and sickles…

Line 1935: can’t fairAdd to non-percentile value: 105
it occurs when wilbur asks you if you’re ready although have not checked all other options