@Nocturnal_Stillness what is the good ending?
fixed those errors you mentioned. Two of them I think you have just misread.
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The alarm scene, if you choose to find your friend, you bump into the vampire before you find them which is why they arenāt mentioned.
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The landing scene also seems correct, you head into Alexās room and return to the landing then if you head into your parents room you return to the landing once more.
What choices did you make? I canāt see a scenario where itād mention she was dead if she survived?
Just did a word count
114,258 words (Episodes 1-5 including the code)
Itās surprising that Iāve been working on this for a year. Iām proud of what Iāve done so far, but Iām aware that Unnatural is average and that it is your guys/girls who make it great so thank you for all your comments over the past 70 pages. You can consider yourselves honorary members of the S.R.T. 
- Just replayed to the scene, and when I pick to search for Sarah that part starts with
"As quickly as you can manage you make your way towards the lab but find the path blocked. A man stands in front of you, drenched in blood. He smiles and reveals fangs. Vampires are a Class A monster and you should face them in groups no smaller than two. "
This sounds right when I head to the lab, but for the Sarah choice I think it should start with heading towards Sarahs room (or where she usually hangs out or was last seen).
By the way, an Alpha Testing mode would be nice. Makes it easier to look a particular scene up. Though I have no idea how much work it would be to implement, so feel free to ignore my comment
- In my playthrough I skipped searching in my parents room and directly went downstairs from Alexās room. With that came the quoted passage where I return to the landing two times because of the missing scene with the parents room.
So you could say it mainly concerns those like me who already know they wonāt find him there and are just to lazy to click through it
114k words? Godā¦ Thats a lot. And Im a member of S.R.T?! YAY WHER DH BADJ
I am the first to get bad ending?!
FUUā¦ [edited and four posts deleted by mod]
Thanks Havenstone.
@Nocturnal_Stillness Iād say my favorite case so far has to be Tooth and Claw. it seems like the most developed. I donāt know about the least favoriteā¦ if you want to know which is the most disappointing Iād say either the gremlin one, or the protest clearing one. The protest looks like a chance to finally get an idea of what the MRA is all about, but you only really get one option if you choose to talk to them. The gremlin one has all this buildup with talking to all these different people, then you get on the plane, and do some seemingly pointless stuff before falling asleep. Then the mission is basically over. Seems like the only choice that matters in it is which partner you pick.
Iāll work on adding more to the protest one. With the Gremlin case it can go one of two ways depending on how you deal with the protest one.
Cloak actually gets the chance to be useful over form during the fight with Ren when you want to master Shade.
I cannot kill the Golem, help anyone?
Trollhunter, use powers, if anyone has managed to kill it without powers I havenāt heard of it.
So have a decent form score, and slice dice and julianne, or become an azure and slice dice and julianne.
Sure, NS, cloak is useful when fighting Ren.
How about when fighting the vampire, the gargoyles, the animatorās bodyguards? There is absolutely no need to kill the animatorās bodyguards when you can just cloak and sucker punch them. Invisibility means you can win a fight before the other person knows thereās a fight in the first place.
How about when finding the Doctor, the werewolves in the park, the vampire in the mansion, and the gremlins on the plane? The MC can see through darkness and shadows right? Unless someone is lit up like a billboard the MC can find them, yes?
How about using cloak to sneak past the security guard in England, or disappearing if the Elder's creep the MC out?
The MC should be using it all the freaking time.
Iām sure there was an option to use cloak during the encounter with the security guard in the cemetery.
Quite a few of my planned options are cut due to time constraints, but Iāve got plans to go back and add the choices Iāve cut out (i.e. non power way of beating gargoyle, trying to arrest the bodyguards and animator etc)
Are you supposed to do the Trick or Treat mission more than once? Because I was able to choose it again on one playthrough.
Well I didnāt see you respond to my other post about it so I didnāt know if you had overlooked it. Anyways Iām on that part right now so letās seeā¦ (Yep itās fixed, though I noticed I suddenly forgot everything I know about Gargoyles. 
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Not that Iāve ever seen, NS, it just gives me three options: stay and wait, sneak past him, or jump him.
Unless the MC uses cloak in one of those options?
Oh, NS, could there be an option to talk to your uncle and aunt about mommy dearest being an Azure if you didn't take Kota on the werewolf mission, or didn't call them up first?
Maybe the MC could get that letter hand delivered.Sorry I forgot to tag you in an earlier post where i mentioned fixing errors.
Just checked the code those options donāt mention cloak but to succeed you need either stealth or cloak > 20 so Iāll revise it.