UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

well, most british people I know watch it so I stereotype >.>

Nah, I Watch Waterloo road.

@stsword

It was an error, I set it up to goto the scene if Lakota_rep was 3 BUT I didn’t put in the goto to divert others past the scene. Either way it is fixed.

@kaosorer

Some of us have better taste than others lol

@trollhunterthethird

The wife watches that too lol

So many terrible programmes!
2 Broke girls all the way. Best show on right now.

How I met your mother, Big bang theory, Waterloo road, all while drinking tea!

Link for the new page

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural/Season%20One/web/mygame/index.html

Heads up NS, I was on the mission Trick or Treat, for guns, I picked the desert eagle ( finally get 2 use that beauty >:D< ) yet doing the mission, it says I got the SIG P226

@MIGhunter

Fixed that now.

@Everyone

adding a slightly different scene when first meeting Denise, added a option to bring up the fact you brought two werewolves back alive to Alexandra when she moans at you for being in denise’s room. Also changed the ending of Episode 5 (goes a nice way and a nasty way) I’m not telling anyone how you get to it, but I’m curious who will be the first to get it Happy Hunting (and please don’t check the code as that’ll spoil the fun :wink: )

@Nocturnal_Stillness
I ran into a slight problem during the ā€œTrick or Treatā€ mission:

line 2309: Non-existent variable ā€œtrickedā€

@CS_Closet

Should work now.

Hmm, I guess I got the happy ending, now I’m wondering what we encountered.

I have a few guesses, but I guess I shouldn’t spoil anything before others get to the new ending.

@stsword

Pm me your guesses

It’s been a while since I last played this. Nice to see it developing, I really like this game :slight_smile:

Couple things:
I did a new playthrough with a female character and in the first chapter with the Self-Defence Classes, my partner is called ā€œheā€ instead of ā€œsheā€:
ā€œUnder the teacher’s watchful eyes you stand opposite Gabriella. You’ve been sparring with her for a month now so you know her strengths and weaknesses. Just as he is aware of your own.ā€

After that I choose to just talk to Sarah instead of beating her up, and this scene immediately comes up:
"ā€œPlease, we don’t need to fight,ā€ you say calmly.

You study Sarah’s movements and can predict her surprise attack easily. With ease, you slip behind her. For a moment Sarah thinks you have vanished, and you strike the back of her head.

[…]"
This change seems quite abrupt. It feels like there is a part missing. Basically any kind of conversation (or reason) before she tries to attack me.

In Chapter 2, when the alarm goes off and I have the choice to either go the lab or to find Sarah, I chose to look for Sarah and got a scene where I’m heading to the lab and encounter a vampire. Sarah didn’t get mentioned at all in that part and it feels like it’s the part supposed for when I want to head to the lab.

At the part where Sarah confesses, I went with it and reciprocated her feelings, though all that follows is a short sentence from her (don’t remember what exactly) that doesn’t directly answer me, and then comes the cut to sleeping again.
This feels quite chopped, especially for a big revelation which had a major influence on her, her parents, our friendship and our school life.
If it isn’t just an error, I think it definitely need to get fleshed out quite a bit more.

In the flashback scene following, there is this passage:
"Searching the room, you can’t spot your brother. His bed is empty or even under his bed. You return to the landing.

But you still can’t find Alex. You return to the landing."
I return one time too often here :wink:

When Arthur is showing me the security tape from the hospital, I choose to option to stay silent and got this:
ā€œArthur holds a hand up, ā€œI already know what happened. We have been trying to achieve this for years. What is it’s name?ā€ā€
He doesn’t need to hold his hand up when I’m already not saying anything.

During the introduction scene of Unit Gamma, the part for Samuel and Marie:
"He motions to the young woman who you had completely hadn’t noticed. Marie seemed to be hiding behind Samuel. "
Not sure about that one, but I think in ā€œhad completely hadn’t noticedā€, the first ā€œhadā€ seems wrong.

At the Fae ritual to deal with the past, while watching my actions a sentence has a part missing.
"ā€œHe wasn’t in here,ā€ you say out loud.

Soon the little you comes out and

You follow as your younger self sneaks downstairs. You hear Lakota chuckle when you both see the young Ophelia slip at the bottom. "

Couple typos when Lakota invites me to go camping:
ā€œā€œThat sounds good to me, is is cold out?ā€ you ask,ā€

After ahile you finally arrive at a small clearing, a large dirt patch dominating the mid section.

ā€œSure,ā€ you reply as you drape the blanket on stray tree limb.
(the ā€œaā€ for the tree limb is missing here)

Logical question: When I go to the Fae, it is reported that I saw the Necromancer there and a team goes after them. Quite some time later (at least a month, if I remember correctly) I get the mission to go after him and it is written as if it just happened, as in the unarmed Alpha Team seeing me off just got killed and the Blood is still fresh.
Did I miss something in between or is there actually a timing error?

Upon confrontation with Sergei:
ā€œMore americans, why can’t you like me alone. My family is all I want. Can’t you just leave me alone?ā€
I think the ā€œlikeā€ should be a ā€œleaveā€ and ā€œAmericansā€ should be with a capital A.

When I then try to find out more about him, I get told to kill him by Lakota and I shoot him without a second thought. Seems contradictory to my choice.

At the scene with the voice and the murder, I’m called ā€œhisā€ instead of ā€œherā€
… the voice coos, "couldn’t save his mama, couldn’t save his papa, and couldn’t even save his baby brother.
This continues on with being called ā€œbrotherā€ instead of ā€œsisterā€ by the accusing Alex.

Thanks for that I’ll fix them all tomorrow :slight_smile:

Why do we have to know who’s in the cast of ā€œThe Godfatherā€ for a final exam???
:-?

@RagEgnite

Because I picked the questions at random lol

Also, found some strange wording.

This is from the scene where you obey the people who tell you to calm down;

ā€œI’m sorry to bother you, but you had to come and see you. I was worriedā€

Thanks will fix it tomorrow.

Another thing I noticed:

You can apparently do the Trick or Treat mission multiple times.

just did denise mission tooth and claw… After we found girl Arthur said sad that denise had to die… She didnt