@stsword,
The Good Doctor was my creation.
All must thank me for that.
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YOU FUCK.
YOU COULD GET HIM TO JOIN THE SRT, WITH HIGH ENOUGH REPUTATION.
My grandpa knew a surgeon from Russia, and where I am from they hate Slavs (Why my parents wanted to move to England, to make sure that me and my brother didnāt grew up with such hate) But onto the story.
My grandpa was beaten up by the police for speaking Kosovan to them (When you were ment to speak Serbian) and he was left in such a state that without help he would surely die, but people were afraid that the police would beat them up so they left him to die. But one man came foward, he was ment to be a person that my grandfather should hate but he saved him. Thanks to his skills, my grandpa evantually was well enough and the two went to a game of cards every Sunday, when I was little and he and my grandfather would teach me Russian and how to play cards. He never told me his name so I called him Uncle.
May he rest in peace.
its all about choice both options will have pros and cons.
sorry to hear that. History is full of stories of inhumane acts done by humans to humans, but also you hear stories of hope. Thank you for sharing it.
not much writing done today busy with work and hanging with my friend. But will work on it tomorrow (writing a conversation and tour of the fae town with Lakota (and possible romance scene 
)
just to point out if you take Lakota on āCreepy Statuesā and choose to wait and see what he does, he uses his power. Though to be fair fae abilities will be explained in more detail during this tour.
@Zed
a) My rep was far from high enough
b) my relationship with victor was far from high enough
c) Victor is a bad influence
d) Im on a murder spree
I was interested in the doctor usually but wellā¦
As tomorrow is Valentineās day I wonāt be working on this and my son turns 1 on Monday so Iāll be busy this weekend. However I have decided to reopen the game so you can see the newer scenes including an alternative scene with Denise in her room (less harsh on her) but also a romance scene with Lakota (@Roslyn_samalt06 helped with this scene, removed a bit of the scene until I get a message back from CoG regarding the level of detail I can use in the scene. However I think the scene still works very well.)
Itās not the full update but it does have new stuff in it so I suggest starting at the beginning so the new variables donāt mess things up. Also there is an achievement list at the end of the demo so you can see some of the stuff you have done, my will be added eventually just basic ones at the moment.
Enjoy.
link:
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural/Season%20One/web/mygame/index.html
Well Lakota might be partially native american, but his family community obviously isnāt.
For one thing, the young elder Luna Melody is described as blonde, and I donāt recall anyone else named in the trip having native american names. Iād have suggested making Luna a RO but I just didnāt think it was feasible logistically so why bother NS about it. But cute, powerful, a leader of an organisation that apparently doesnāt want you to exist, whatās not to like? lol
But maybe Kota's dad or grandparent brought home an amerindian.@Nocturnal_Stillness I second Talon5505, this is a wonderful game~ I was wondering is Lakota a Native American? itās mentioned what Scarlet is descended from so I was curious about him.
Nocturnal,
Thank you for all the time and effort you put into Unnatural. It is a wonderful game that I am sure will become a big hit. I can only imagine how hard you work and I admire your resolve. In your situation I would of given up after it got SO long.
Your characters are excellent and well thought out. Your action scenes are so exciting. The idea itself is just amazing. I cannot wait for the game to finally be finished. When it is I will be so sad that I will no longer get to look forward to more and more writing in Unnatural.
I am one of your major supporters and just wanted you to know I appreciate your work.
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Hm. I chose the option to use form on the zombies you encounter after the scene in Deniseās room. I got this game restarting error: line 1736: Non-existent variable āanimateā
When I tried to go after the animator I get an error.
Oh and isnāt SRT supposed to capture zombies for study according to their classification?
And I didnāt get the scene about whether or not to try to save the good doctor, does that mean you decided we have to be the one to take the case to get that scene now?
Thereās a typo, if a zombie killed the MCās family one of the reactions to the news is that the āmurdered belong in jail.ā
Error: line 1736: Non-existent variable āanimateā
Scene: episode04
Yeah you only get the scene if you do that case.
Fixed the errors on 1736 and 3991 still looking at the choice body error.
Iāve noticed with my keen sense ofā¦ paying more attention to females, that Denise has a rather sparse description for a potential romance option. I mean, the only adjectives we have for her are āyoungā and āred hairedā not that you need a huge description, but a bit more certainly would make things even better, if you have time.
I did like the new edit of the scene in Deniseās room. Itās less physically traumatic for her, though I suppose it a way itās a bit more mentally traumatic. Iām glad that you had Alexandra mention the wolves you captured.
I got an error on the first new playthrough instead of getting my list of accomplishments, it worked fine the second time though.
It would have been nice to be able to make a come back reminding Alexandra that one lowly little werewolf isn't a threat to the MC, considering I used my green lantern ring to bring in two werewolves without any trouble whatsoever.
And if I saw my family get eaten by a zombie, I'm not sure I'd appreciate a zombie movie, just saying.
The rapport with Austin seems to fluctuate at random. Sometimes it's 10, then it's 50, then it's 10 again.
Also, it gives me the option of doing Trick or Treat after already finishing trick or treat.
And about all the fae being related. Presuming that the Azure caused the mythology of angels, instead of being based on them, then the Azure were created over 5000 years ago. If the fae were created around the same time then saying they are all related while technically true doesn't matter at this point, and the fae would have had time to spread to every corner of the earth.