Yes thank you , still trying to get reputation for likeing to review romance.
Minor update:
Added @Farside 's additions to the Pilot episode.
Improved the party scene (players can now choose to talk/flirt with either Michelle or Todd)
links:
Revised version [works up to the start of Episode 3 then asks you to play again.]
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural1/web/mygame/index.html
Old link [works up to Episode 4 case choices.]
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural%20(Season%20One)/Unnatural/web/mygame/index.html
@Nocturnal_Stillness This is the revised link
Error: line 381: Invalid expression, couldnāt extract another token: #Tackle the kid.
Also, during the prologue I was called the older brother when I chose to look for Alex and when I chose not to be friends with Sarah it said that I reaffirmed my friendship with her.
Iām really happy that you changed the party sequence so that the MC can flirt with the same sex if they want.
And itās so cool to see my additions in the actual text of this game.
I had no problem getting to the end of the game. I didnāt find any errors.
@Nocturnal_Stillness
Never mind about that choosing to be friends with sarah thing. That was my fault.
Me gotz error
Line 1908: increasing indent not allowed, expected 2 was 17
@P0RT3R which episode was that in?
Episode one SRT
@Nocturnal_Stillness Yay! ren! Now its time to get back to whacking people with giant purple dildos in sr3:)) .wait, I have exams 
Here you can have another of my wings , just so now they match
Good guess, that is the price to bring Ren back, you must permantly give up a wing, so youāll only get a total of 5 wings instead of 6.
Okay sounds fair wonāt use half of them anyway sooooooo yay I got myself back (forever alone)
I dont care Ren so i got more powers, then?
depending on your choice you either keep the option to use Form, Focus and Cloak, or you reclaim your azure powers and get the option to use angelus, letvir vatra and Venator.
need update X3
Iām still working on it at the moment, but Iāve just made it so the revision link does go to where Iāve gotten to in Episode 4 (āTrouble with faeā case complete) and am working on āSticks and Stonesā as we speak)
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/82599458/Unnatural1/web/mygame/index.html
Codes are Zombie Exodus Vendetta I dunno th other
@Talon5505 and everyone else who would like to know
the codes are:
[Code one: zombie exodus] - you can find this one by reading the āZombie Exodusā film newstory.
[Code two: vendetta] - you get this one on the beta path by taking Anthony Luciano to Unit Gamma.
[Code three: hunter] - not found in the game yet still looking for a place to hide it.