Thanks, @Roslyn_Samalt06, but I haven’t contributed any refinements yet, but I look forward to working on this game with @Nocturnal_Stillness. He’s got a great story going, and I’m a fan of the episodic format.
Hopefully I can help give the female MC’s path flavor without it being distracting to the game. : )
Yeah just looked at the thread asking for female writer and then I saw it was closed 
.pm me if you need opinion on romance scene. Kinda a critic on romance in these games , just kinda happened. Well you can ask me for ideas romance reviews all is confidential with me. Also Mara does have good ideas as well.
Roslyn you are so kind, you are good too =;
@Nocturnal_Stillness if i chose we dont need to fight, the story acts like you use your skill to defeat Sara
I don’t like Sarah she needs to pick her friends I have been in that situation many times she can have the friend ship but I need her for the soccer so I play buddy buddy however when it comes to promotion time I Make sure she is not the recommend one
I always go beta rute, i prefer smart background, and the beta story line. So i dont care Sarah @Nocturnal_Stillness it will be cool that one of the reasons of her bullinesh is a hate about her sexuality and feelings for pc.My best friend is gay and a bully attormented in the highschool years later, the bully admit him that he was scared about his homosexuality so fight with him. It will be a good adition to the character and maybe add a cool sexual tension to people who choose her, a jellousy about your love interest, and if is denise maybe she try to boicot the relarionship?
I’ll look into that error. The bully’s reason is to do with family issues but I’ll consider it.
As long as you pick one of the soccer choices you can still play the match even if you choose to not be friends with her. The ‘college’ friends asks for your help instead.
Who is sarah?
The girls bully friend
Girl version of craig?
Yes wired
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Yeah it flipflops
Depending on whether you player is Male of female a few characters switch
Craig = Sarah (Bully)
Gabriel = Gabriella (sparring in partner if chose to learn to fight)
The following are the characters who replace Craig/Sarah if you don’t accept them as friends again.
Mark = Diana (If you get into New York Technical)
Zack = Barbara (If you get into Washington College)
Jordan = Emily (If you get into New Jersey College)
Im always a guy and befriend craig
My mind hurts from trying to comprehend talk
Which college is the best one you can get?
New york technical
O ok i get that every time. 