Had someone send me an error message saying the choice of your first case runs out of options
The only error I ever had(That I can remember) is when I just got my first wing
@Nocturnal_Stillness Making all the romanceable characters bi-sexual is completely unrealistic and would, in my opinion, weaken their character and uniqueness. Btw I own Dragon Age 2 and love it, their were some parts of the game that I didnāt like, but I didnāt let that stop me from loving it. I also thought all the characters bi-sexual was silly.
@Cloudian
Thatās how I feel too. I just need to revise some of the least liked characters so people donāt end up feeling the only interesting npcs I canāt romance.
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I found a error when i mess up with the first cases i select one and cancel and do the same with the other opcion and appear the error:
Error: line 1412: No selectable options
Scene: episode02
it was my fault for be silly :-))
Fixed.
Iāve yet to play sr3 but have played the previous 2 and Iāve played all the gta games. Why do you ask?
Bingo that could be why people are getting the error. Thanks!
āBingoā thatās a funny game
@Nocturnal_Stillness I was in a dilenma on which to play so I needed your almighty guidance to lead me through this perilous journeyās crossroadsā¦ did I overdo it? and to see how many people own them to decide which is better
Both series are good Sr if you want ott action and silliness gta if you want a more serious game
lol dont think you will get this but when i saw the school daze case i thought about a really nice boat
go watch school days lol or atleast the ending and youāll get it.
-Denise & romance
I think Denise would have very strong feelings for the PC, if saved from the experiment, and treated like a normal person during āBy tooth and clawā. He/she saved Daniseās life while she was in an incredibly scary place, and actually treats her like a human being, despite knowing sheās an unnatural.
Iām not sure if these feelings necessarily would have to be romantic in nature. She could begin to see the PC as some sort of role model for her self, especially if the players decides to reveal to her theyāre an unnatural too. Establishing at least a deep friendship with her should be easy if the PC is interested in it.
Nevertheless, in my opnion, it would make a certain amount of sense to make her PlayerCharacter-sexual, as terrible as this usually is. He/she is Deniseās knight in shining armour, after all. There should be a lot of positive āfirstsā for Denise when it comes to the PC.
If you decide to make her straight, Iām more than okay with it as well. Iām interested in exploring the character you wrote, first and foremost. The problem is, one can usually either get a romance, or next to nothing when it comes to these choices in games. If sheās straight, I would suggest including a friendship path for gay PCs, both female and male, so sheās not a total loss for these characters. Give them the chance to spar with her in the gym, spend some time together while reading books from the library, or just watch TV while sharing a beer or painting their nails and gossipping about their favourite actors.
Itās always annoying me to see every character I didnāt decide to romance get left behind in terms of content.
- Current version of Unnatural
Some mistakes I noticed while reading.
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Chapter 3, Zombie scene, talking with the Unnatural-rights guy
āThey are zombies they need to be put down.ā [To be done]
This actually works, I think you can remove the TBD.āThat doesnāt give you the right to kill them,ā Max says firmly,
Replace the comma with a full stop.
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- Chapter 4, First conversation with Ren
āKeep the powers the way they areā
āTry to regain my azure powers backā
Both sentences are missing a full stop at the end.
- Chapter 4, First conversation with Ren
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-Chapter 4, arriving at Lakotaās home
"So he is related to everyone i someoneā¦ "
There seems to be something missing here.āItās annoying but family is important I let him catch up with his relatives.ā
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-Chapter 4, first ceremony
āprepare to use shade.ā
āwait to see what they do.ā
The first word of each sentence should start with a capital letter. -
-Chapter 4, waking up
āI need to go and think about thingsā
Missing a full stop at the end.āThat sounds horrible,ā you say,
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-Chapter 4, speaking with Ren and making your choice
āSo you want to regain your wings. Gain the powers of Angelus/b], Letvir Vatra and Venator?ā
The /b] looks like it shouldnāt be there.
Would it be okay if I sent you a PM if I found some more ortho- and typographical errors?
If you arenāt looking for input in this regard, I do apologise for wasting so much space on it.
Denise can not be open for romance with both genders, that is not how wolves work, they do not have homosexual or bisexual wolves. So if you want to keep it in sync with the common legend of wolves I do not think you should have Denise open for females.
have dragon age 2,i found everybody being bi kinda stupid
(anders was obviously into men, him being a romance option for women was stupid)
@Nocturnal_Stillness
Ok, great. Iāll try to set an hour or two aside for it during the week.
@Talon5505
Surprisingly, there has been documented homosexual behaviour in canidae. Not only in dogs, but in wolves as well.
See: Bagemihl, Bruce (1999). Biological Exuberance: Animal Homosexuality and Natural Diversity. St. Martinās Press ISBN 0-312-19239-8 Pages 231, 436ā440
But I can see where youāre coming from, Denise being a lycanthrope AND bi-/homosexual would probably be like being hit by lightning twice in a row. The sheer odds against it would be astronomical, I think. Being a minority inside an even smaller minority would also be incredibly rough. Especially if lycanthropes share your outlook on whatās proper behaviour for a wolf.
I think Denise should be a bisexual but her wolf side straight