Yes, more or less. I do hope this won’t pose a problem.
“I’m not making animal noises for you”
I never said that you have to.
It may be a little bit short, but here is at least the Prolog for my game. It only contains the character creation, so there won’t be that much Story.
In advance, i’m sorry for bad grammar or wrong words. This is the first time i’m writing something like this. I still hope that you will enjoy it and I would really like to hear your opinion.
Their is an error when you pick your surname or try to write it in
This may still short but I like being Raiju
Anyway, these are what I found
I think “to” should be “for”
“first name” just need space.
I also found this error
found some typos (hopefully nothing that was mentioned above!)
When playing as Kitsune, there something that seems odd to me
It is said that Kitsune mc fur color is same as his/her hair color, but the tail fur is always white, is that intentional?
Love the powers we get!
Yes it is intentional. The white tail is supposed to be a inherited feature in the family of the Kitsune MC.
Oooh, thats very interesting.
Been waiting for this demo!
Some typos (please ignore if previously reported):
If everything works fine, the first chapter will be released by the middle of November.
Future content of the first chapter:
The first chapter will contain an explanation about the attributes and skills of your character.
You will meet Celica, Chris, Emilia and Nick during the course of the chapter. There will also be a conversation between the MC and his/her mother.
McCree MC confirmed!
“IT’S HIGH NOON”
The prologue baddie sounds like an evil soulmancer, what with him having a glowing red aura and red eyes - and the aura coalescing at the end too.
His soul is corrupted. That is the reason for the red color of his aura and the red glow of his eyes.
Regarding his abilities. I could explain why he can manipulate his aura in such a strange way and what kind of species he is, but sadly, that would be a massive Spoiler.
Of course, the Plot must be protected
Paints his soul and eyes white What corruption? Where?
A few new informations. Since the MC will meet their mother in the next chapter, I thought you would like to know, that the first name of the MCs mother will change depending on your choosen species.
The names are:
Half Dragon: Alice
Grey Wolf: Emma
Have i noticed a reference?