“I’m surprised you decided to join me.” He says with a smile. “There isn’t anyone I would want there with me then you.”

than

Chris is my friend. I’m glad to have him with you.

me

He sees you frown deepen,

your

It’s a first time you’ve seen a Fishman.

the

Your heartbeat banging as loud as drums in your ears, but you ignore it, as you focus on the women, who is now being dragged around like a rag doll.

woman

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I’m definitely following this

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@Rosencrantz Thank you :ok_hand:t2:

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Its a very nice demo
Are they going to be more ro?

@Michael_Millan Definitely. I’m on vacation right now, so wasn’t able to update anything yet.

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Hey there dudes,

Sorry for the late update. I was on vacation so couldn’t write much nor update anything.

However, in this update we have our first fight, first look at the power of your PC, and selection of physical attributes. It ain’t much, I just wanted to update this, so that people won’t think this WIP is abandoned :smile:

So, sorry and enjoy :smiley:

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yay new update

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Honestly i was a bit dissapointed by the prologue and the first 2 pages. But the rest of the writting more than won me over. The problem with the first few chapters felt a bit too cliche.But after that your writting became pretty interesting.As a first try you did more than excellent. Good luck to you and tour future projects.:sparkles::sparkles:

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Thank you my friend. I’m happy for such amazing feedback

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Are you sure that’s unique ? The save data got tangle up with the wip demon recollect and forsaken for some reason.

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I got it from the dasingdon while uploading my game. I don’t really know why that error occurred.

You can put anything there as long as you’re sure it’s unique. If it two wips have the same name for save data then the device you’re using will assume that it’s the same game.

What I’m trying to say is, the error should be fixed if you change the “mygame” in to something else. Literally anything will work as long as it don’t have space.

Eg: sm_init imlame | 3

Like this… The more unique it is the less the chance the save file will get tangle up with other games.

I hope you understand what I’m saying cause I really suck at explaining codes. Lol.

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Don’t worry I get what you mean. I’m not really good with codes, so I didn’t really know we could do that :sweat_smile:

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