Oooh, thank you so so so much!!! I super seriously appreciate that!!! I’m so glad to hear that the rework is such an improvement! It’ll probably get more finetuned as time goes forward, as well- I’ll likely go back and change a few things here and there, dial it in even more, perhaps make more options for choices even. It’s very much a “I need to get to the next story point” moment right now hahaha! Thank you again!!
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Ooof, I know what caused it too! I might flesh out that ending scene a little more- I wanted it to be heart rending, but also not overstay its welcome, you know what I mean? I really appreciate you taking the time to play!!
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I enjoyed your story and the vibrant prose. An excellent portrayl of children. Keep up the good work.
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Oooh, thank you so much!!! That really means a lot!!
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Awww, the first chapter with the relationships between the children are so cute! I can’t wait to explore our powers and relationships further as we age. I like it so far!
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I think i might have missed an update
Hey this is super underrated, I love this! This is really good storytelling, you got me hooked with what’s up right now. This really should be more popular than it is, this is a good story
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Is the author taking a break or working on an update, either way take your time.
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I’m late to the party but seriously this wip is gem and i’m sorry to myself why I refuse to read it the first time. But yeah I like it too much and hope to see more of this.
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