Transcendence: Whispers of Destiny (WIP) (Minor update: 10k words added)

Thank you so much, hope to keep you engaged in the next arc as well :smiling_face: :heart:

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Just a little nitpick here, tons of Japanese names and you had to pick that one? Being reminded of that sort of ruins the immersion for me.

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According to me the consequences of using names that are already popular in media are -

  1. People get more attracted to stuff they know about rather than some random name.
  2. For some, it might ruin the immersion.
    Thanks for the genuine suggestion though. Might change the first family’s name once I get back.
    Also, you’re a fellow Asian?? :pleading_face:
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What do you mean?

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I believe that the comment was meant for me rather than you.
Hope you enjoyed the intro arc :smiling_face: :heart:

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Have changed the first family name as per your suggestion, thank you for that, and I hope you now have an immersive experience.

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still getting this a_journey_rekindled line 2654: invalid indent, expected 5, was 4 when selecting eye color

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I’m so sorry for that. Can you pls tell me in which realm’s eye selection did you have a problem with? Will correct it as soon as possible

Elysoriam

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I’ve replayed the whole option and I’m afraid I couldn’t get any error I also remember closing the eye color selection error quite a long time ago. I will look into it again if the issue persists :blush: :blush:

Sorry but I am getting confused, read the prelude set all the customizations, then we’ll the beating continues then Goes to act 1, retraced steps, all the customization again, but can’t complete as it either fails to load the next page after selecting a family or an error about an indent.

I do like what I have read so far but act one being the same of the prelude/preface confuses me.

Did try the family name at the top and family name at the bottom, keeping all the choices I made in the prelude the same in Act 1

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I believe thats where the demo currently ends but i could be mistaken lol and its just a error of some sort.

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That’s prolly why I got the eye color thing again bc it took me to the customization again and I thought that was part of the game

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So author can we get revenge on our family and aunt

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Okay so arc 1 is just the prelude, the part where I write end of prologue is the end of 1st arc " Footsteps Retraced".
IIM working on the next arc rn so yeah, there’s nothing new after the end of prologue statement it keeps on going in a loop.

Have to ask how to terminate it ig.

Yep, that’s where the demo ends, with the 'End of Prologue ’ statement.

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Really sorry for the inconvenience. Will fix it up asap

:joy::joy: Short answer : yes.

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I can’t wait to see how the story plays out. You did a good job on trying to make a narrative. For your first Pages Personally, all stories are unique no matter. They have their short for long with their demos. Or there’s symbol of writing.

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Thank you so much :heart::heart:. Hope to keep you engaged :smiling_face::smiling_face:

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