Touch of Lies (WIP) some...Prologue OUT~

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Fixed!

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Hi! I am really enjoying the demo so far but I think there is a continuity error of some sort. See after the two kids take the bread from the man, even if I choose choices that isnā€™t ā€œtaking the breadā€ from them, I somehow end up with the next line of passages that says so.

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Fixed it, thank you so much for telling me, I never would have realized!

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Beautiful update. Itā€™s also nice that added some personality types in there as well which reacts as itā€™s meant to regardless of choice. Itā€™s good to see the effects of the ro starting to happen depending on choice u made. For mine my character was mean but thatā€™s because they are a bit shy saying they like people.

Just prepare yourself the list of typos I find lol.

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I found a bug that need fixing in the update.

In the talk of who would win in a fight with everyone i clicked Rond but it said this instead: ā€œEuphemia all the way.ā€ You answer, ā€œI mean have you heard her talk?ā€
It should of been about him not Euphemia as nice as she is.

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I have been on a big writers block break, but Iā€™m back, maybe?

I fixed the mistake, thanks!

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Iā€™m ready for it all :sweat_smile:

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Glad to see your back, Iā€™ll make sure too come hangout.

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ā€œWhat your language, Mia,ā€ Drogo says.

ā€œEuphemia? Drogo? Sorry to interrupt, but we need to talk.ā€ Quinn stands at the end of the table, hands clasped nervously. She gives you a small smile, you can tell it doesnā€™t read her eyes. Drogo and Euphemia exchange a look and stand up.

Your gender did not chance.

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Got them all fixed up, thank you for reporting!

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Thank you, Iā€™ll try to work harder! :sweat_smile:

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Might want to update the title of this thread

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What genre is this? action? drama? fantasy? or just a romance story?

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Main genres are drama and action with romance being a big aspect, however, this is not fantasy because there is no magic, but itā€™s set in a medieval time period and has may fantasy aspects!

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I currently canā€™t edit the title, but Iā€™m working on it. Thanks for bringing it to my attention!

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Is this still being worked on?? This is one of my favorite Ifs so I make sure to check it every now and then for updates :DD

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tumblr says itā€™s abandoned :c

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Sadge. I really like this if.