Totem Force [Updated 24/05/18]



Did I miss any updates?


Possibly? What was the last thing you did?


Darkness = 37. Will = 78. Empathy = 16. Intellect = 46.
Tot = 50.

Since it said to report to author! That was a really good demo and I can’t wait to see more!

EDIT: Likely an unpopular opinion, but Lani is probably the most interesting character for me so far so DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing how far her family ties go! And the ‘inevitable betrayal’ that Sammy will be completely right on that occurs at some point.


I am not really sure, but I think that MC woke up from the death for the second time.


how totem force going i hope going well


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so is totem force is it still gonig?


Yup. :neutral_face:

It’s a little slow-going at the moment – due in part to the much more branching nature of the current chapter – but it’s certainly still going.


Be careful with peer reviews while helpful in revising they can lead to writers block and contradictions to your original story to fit their end narrative. Focus on your end goal for the story and be careful with writing yourself into a corner with extra choices. While welcome they can overwhelm you in your writing to the point where you feel the need to improve upon them only to scrap the paths for convenience to the story.


ok am glad you are still going


So close to the finish, yet so far away at the same time, eh? :sweat_smile:


Thank goodness! I can’t wait to get back to saving the city!


So… it’s even possible to romance Akira?


Akira’s not really into romance, but there’s certainly a friendship route with them.


Isn’t Akira an asexual though? Kinda got the feeling from the story


So she isn’t a RO? I had her affection over 80 at the end of the demo.


Wait, I thought Akira was an RO? Did something change? I recall that being an option… :thinking:


Dunno, at the end you can ask her for a date, but you will end up friendzoned, unless I’m doing something wrong. :smile:


That’s pretty much what I meant, yeah… :sweat_smile:

I guess their route isn’t really that different from the romantic ones, except it’s more about having fun and less about actual romance. So, I guess they would count as an asexual RO? :thinking:


It’s a real shame that the only way to get Lana’s RO is to offer to be her personal thug. She was definitely one of my favorite routes too besides Anara.
Is there any way to romance Ryu?