So I haven’t touched Procreate or my iPad in a while, but I’ve actually really been enjoying drawing the ROs after a day of writing. It’s a pretty relaxing way to spend an hour or so, and it’s really fun to capture them visually too!
Chapter is currently around 7k words, and I did end up doing a stats overhaul. I’m really excited for this chapter to be published and to be read by you guys! Until then, take some art:
Ernest:
Mars:
Your art has improved by a lot! This is amazing.
The arts look amazing 
Thanks, guys! 
Appreciate your kind words.
I post art and other fun stuff more regularly on my tumblr, so be sure to check that out if you want to see more!
@bubblesodatea
I started your demo, and even though I probably don’t have enough time to finish it today, I just wanted to mention that when I read this:
I visibly smiled. You’ve got a talent with words, this was the most amazing sentence I’ve read all week. 
Aww, thanks, that’s high praise! Hope you like your play through!
Update coming Friday 9/18 (PST)! Chapter 4 is a big one - 25k words! I can’t wait to share it with y’all. 
Wow – great news … especially since I thought school was going to derail you for a bit. lol
@anon14780897
Ahh! I’m so happy you like my game, and I really hope you do like the update!
Hehe, AAPI pride!
@Eiwynn
LOL I actually finished this chapter before school started! Just waited until now to post it, since I knew I’d be busier.
09.18.20 Update!
Hi everyone! Happy September. 
I bring a completed Chapter 4, which contains a change of scene, some questions answered, even more unanswered, and finally meeting ALL THE ROs !
The size of the chapter is 25k+ words, which makes the game 66k+ words in total.
Update includes:
Links
What I’m looking for in terms of feedback:
As always, thank you to @ipsolun and @imvietnamesenotchinese for beta reading for me! <3
Yaaay
I think Mars’s name repeats too often in ch2 when she’s introduced. It’s awkward to read when almost every sentence has ‘Mars’ in it.
Ch4 had some typos which I intended to send screenshots of but realised I forgot to take them 
(sorry) hopefully other people can help with that. Wasn’t anything horrible just some word repetition, spelling and ‘an’ instead of ‘a’; it didn’t take away from the reading experience.
Also I love Ernest now.
And here I was imagining Tiffany like a black girl 
Just want to say I really like Teddy. He’s so sweet.
Oh and I found this
Thanks for pointing this out! I’ll take a look at it and see if it needs to be rewritten, and I’ll keep an eye out for the other typos too.
Glad to hear it!
@Bokeh
Ha, that’s funny because I described “Tiffany”/Clémence as being pale when she was introduced. But nope, she’s Korean. 
Glad you liked Teddy, and thank you for catching that typo.
Thanks for catching this!
So I’m curious, are you going to be using both Fae Courts in this game?
You are welcome!
And must have totally skipped over that crucial detail haha
@Jordan_Kelley
Hmm…Both will be mentioned, one will appear more than the other. But I’m also lovingly bastardizing lore as it suits me. Hope this answers your question!
