To break a curse/ To break the cursed (22k words) | Medical-Drama, Fantasy, romance, slice of life, sci fi

To break a curse/ To break the cursed is a game of many facettes. Do the tags look like I just mashed all of the buttons I could find? Maybe. Is that because I took parts of everything I liked and tried to create a compelling story out of it? Totally! Trust me I have a plan!

Synopsis

The World is doomed. Life as we know it will end soon unless someone takes care of it. Too bad you spent the last decade of your life dedicated to become a doctor instead of having fun. You leave the saving the world part to people more qualified than you. Your hands are full with patient that need saving themselves.

After years of grueling work as an intern and hours spent in a stuffy lab for your research you finally were able to publish your first paper! It’s about to make huge waves. Sadly you can’t fully concentrate on changing the medical system when more pressing issues arise.

You play as a genius doctor in a world that is a bizzare mix of sci-fi and fantasy elements. When everything is different can you still issue a diagnosis? Cure magic diseases, romance your co-workers and fight for your research in this Slice of Life novel

Did I mention that you get transfered to a special ward that treats a Knight’s Order/secret service

What to expect

The synopsis really does a bad job of conveying the core of my story. It’s hard to talk about it without spoiling too much. All that you need to know for now is that the story will have a Scrubs/Dr. House vibe to it. It’s a blend of personal drama, romance, slice of life and medical cases which allow you to play detective! You can expect a (hopefully) interesting cases with fictional components based on real world science. The story is supposed to have a hopeful and light hearted touch (with a bit of angst sprinkled on top). I put a lot of work into research for the medical stuff and hope I’m as acurate as possible but no guarantee of course. This whole thing is a loveletter to the topic of medicine itself because I really enjoy learning about the human body.

Terminal illnesses and death will be major themes in the story so be aware of that

Romance options

No good romance without a lover right?

Two more are pending but I don’t want to reveal too much about them just yet. There is a third one planned but I am not sure about them.

Dr. Naomi/Navin Hildreth

Personality: All work no play. They are a hard working and talented witch doctor well versed in magic. They come from a prestigious family of high ranking doctors and intead to follow in their footsteps. Since their are a similary skilled that starts at roughly the same time as you a bit of rivalry is preprogrammed. Born with a condition common in her family.

Appearance:

F - Violet hair usually worn in a bun, eyes that glow in pure violet, wears traditional black robes for spell casters, with red pearl necklace.

M - short Violet hair, eyes that glow in pure violet, wears traditional black robes for spell casters, with red pearl necklace.

Erika/Erik Kastelle

Personality: A lazy brat who always falls upwards in life. They love having fun and luxus over everything else and is not above manipulation to get what they want. Works as a nurse at your new job. They are the kind of person that makes you wonder if they hide something else behind the sweet smile. If nothing else they know how to have a great time!

Appearance:

F - Blond hair in twin tails, shiny blue eyes and refuses to work in ugly scrubs ,1.60, human

M - Well combed blond hair in a mullet, shiny blue eyes and refuses to work in ugly scrubs, 1.65, human

Darwin/ Dana Einthoven

Personality: The Scientist/engineer of our cast. They are smooth and easy going. Everywhere they go they a exude an aura of positivity without being over the top. Curiosity has never killed this cat. Instead it gave the cat a small battalion of drones and other useful tech

Appearance:

M - Wild Turqoise fluffy hair and furry tail, extractable claws, with yellow eyes, only wear quality clothing, 183, Qitan (Cat-People from the desert)

F - Wild Turqoise hair up to her shoulder blades and furry tail, extractable claws, with yellow eyes, only wear quality clothing, 181, Qitan (Cat-People from the desert)

Currently it’s about ( 1 Chapter with 22k words). I dont know how regulary I can update but I will try my best to be consistent!

To play the demo, go here:https://cogdemos.ink/go/7442

To the tumblr page(I’m new to this no clue how it works): @daedalus-writes on Tumblr

Tags: Medical-Drama, Fantasy, romance, slice of life, sci fi

I would appreciate feedback of any kind! Especially helpful would be an overview of your stats, general opinion and I would love to know if you solved the first case/ how hard it was for you and your outcome of the conference.

AI Disclosure:

No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI

(I do look up words on DeepL sometimes because english is not my first language but I dont think that really counts.)

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Sounds interesting! ill give a a read when I have the time.

Also I now find it weird that this isn’t a bigger genre in IF thinking it through.

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Hey thank you so much it would mean the world to me. I also thought I would find more medical dramas but I only found one so far(The Citadel). I hope I can do the genre justice.

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Ooo this is so cool. I just read the whole thing and it was so amazing. I am so intrigued by this, the ending caught me so off guard and I can’t wait to see much more! This is so good istg. There were a few spelling errors I saw but I was way too focused to screenshot them so I’ll point them out as soon as I can, but all in all this is great! :blush:

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I’m glad you enjoyed it! I just finished correcting some spelling mistakes so maybe they are already taken care of.

If you enjoyed the end of the first chapter stay tuned! That patient will play a major role in the story

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This sounds exciting. It’s been a long time since there was IF where you play a doctor, scientist etc. I’ll definitely check it out.

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I hope you will enjoy it!

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This was such a different type of story to the usual ones we get here, and I found it fascinating. There’s a lot of character choices so it felt appropriate to chose one that suited my personality, and I quite liked the way we listened to the elf and then diagnosed him with what we learned.

I will say that the paragraphs could do with more spacing however because there was far too much put together that it began to feel like a wall of text and I know many people will just click right off the story without even reading when they see that.

I’m looking forward to the future update and the little human girls case study!

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I really enjoyed this one very much. To be a doctor and working with a unwilling nurse (such a brat :laughing:) and to be rivals with a witch doctor, sounds awesome. And now I wait for the last romance option, the kitty cat hehe~

I’m looking forward to more :heart:

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Yeah the wall of text criticism is valid. I will try a different spacing but I think the amount of text is a bigger problem that is hard to fix. The conference is the worst offender I feel. Maybe I should cut some stuff or move it to another place. Thank you for the feedback!

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Im glad you enjoy the characters! Im not sure yet when the cat will appear. Im trying to include them in the next chapter or at worst the one after that. I really want the whole cast to be together as soon as possible to give them the time they deserve

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I haven’t played your story yet, but right off the bat, Naomi is a Japanese name while Navin leans towards Indian. I think you could go with either Nao (Male) or Navina (Female) instead. Just informing you in case it wasn’t deleberate. If it was, you can continue as is, and I apologise for the breaching

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Naomi can be either Hebrew, Japanese, or various cultures. When used in various languages and cultures, it is typically spelled as Noemi. Naomi, in Japanese, is the most common modern version of the name.

Nao is a very good Japanese male equivalent. Noah is a good Hebrew male alternative.

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Just informing you in case it wasn’t deleberate. If it was, you can continue as is, and I apologise for the breaching

Was my comment read properly by you? However, this information is appreciated by me

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Hey! I appreciate the insight but Dr. Hildreth is not meant to be japanese/asian. I am still unsure if I want to include a cannon ethnicity at all to the characters since it’s a different world altogether but if you anyone is interested I will inculde a list of my “head cannon until I decide whether it’s relevant or not”

Head cannon

Darwin/Dana Einthoven - Arabic

Naomi/Navin Hildreth - african/south africa

Willebrand siblings - greece

Erika/Erik Kastelle - european

There is another character that is asian but Im not sure if I want to include a romance for them yet.

Some of them are more vague then others and most names don’t fit perfectly into the culture but I just went with what felt right it’s a fantasy story after all. Im pretty set on the surnames because they have a meaning to me but if anyone has suggestions for different first names I’m always open to change! For some more than others.

I didn’t want to spam my own thread but I will take this opportunity to sneak in a few polls. I should have done it sooner cause most people interested already finished the demo I assume but maybe some are still around to answer.

What did you enjoy most about chapter 1/ What do you want to see more of?

  • Figuring out the case/Diagnosis
  • Slice of life
  • the conference
  • world building
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How would you rate the difficulty level of Sir Powers diagnosis?

  • frustrating
  • hard
  • medium
  • easy
  • too easy
0 voters

I just finished chapter one and I’m really hooked!

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