@Cloudian saying “Plus her virginity is more of an incentive to romance her” is exceedingly demeaning to women and their sexuality.
How so?
btw its just a joke. tho it is true.
Does anyone know how to romance Yiska? I did it once before, but now everytime I try he always says " let’s stick to bussiness" or something like that.
This, is a brilliant game! So many different options… The mix of storyline and replayability are brilliant, and the amount of different skills is brilliant. I would love to see more of this 
MaraJade- Excellent summary. You are certainly the expert on this. I’m a little sad that there can be no virgin widow… although this is precisely what the groom’s family would be arguing in an attempt to strip away Maria’s inheritance. The trouble lies wuth all those witnesses (Which I vaguely remember reading about in various tales of royalty), but if those can also be silenced or paid off (and Maria herself murdered of course) then the inheritance might be diverted to other hands. Distant relations perhaps or the matrilineal side of things.
Yes, it doesn’t even necessarily have to be the groom’s family behind these things.
As for Maria not being able to leave Spain, well, she will soon be Mexican. Would that change anything?
This talk has really been interesting and I do hope it continues.
Bloodwyche- Actually, there are at present seventeen different Indian names that the MC can have. They are all real and mean something different.
I went a little crazy crafting chapter 3.
As for fighting Tumbleweed Jack, I assume you mean the part in Chapter two where he calls you out of your office? I hadn’t noticed anything wrong there, but I will definitely take a look. An intersection of the MC drawing first and then Caraway saving the day? Can’t be too many of those. Thanks.
@AllenGies im like being helpfull, i know that all this canonical stuff can be dificult to understand, more if you came from a non mayority catolical one. If you like the virgin widow can make her protestant a german noble woman. But i know the spanish version seems more romantical. You can choose the romantic spanish poetry topic. The seduced novice by a don Juan. And her family cast away to avoid the escandal, maybe him can try to follow her, this kind of stuff is very poetic and ronantic
Cloudian- It was a blunt joke and we are in mixed company. If you would extend a simple apology to anyone who was offended, I am certain it would be accepted.
God knows I have done worse in my time.
12lexy12- Yiska has a certain threshold of influence you need to have to romance him. All the romantic interests do. If they don’t like your Character enough, they rebuff.
Redgrave- I’m glad you like it. There will be more. Eight chapters in all if I can manage it. Chapter six is proceeding at present, though I am not certain how long writing it will take.
MaraJade- The Seduced Novice by Don Juan. I’ll look into. Thanks again. 
Then how do you get Yiska to like you?
Finally got around to a badboy playthrough and noticed some more tiny things.
Even the flyspeck coaling and watering stations out in the middle of nowhere have a dispatch office now, will no doubt become cities and towns eventually.
This sentence seems a little odd to me.
Also enclosed are your wages for three months. At last, an honest day’s pay. You were getting worried there that all your sweat and efforts were
This sentence may be incomplete, or at least the end didn’t appear for me (FireFox browser).
“Doubt it.” Steele shakes his head slow, keeps his eyes on you. “More likely, this celestial is charlatan or impostor.” Shouldn’t there be an *a* between charlatan or impostor?
EVen so, just a few years ago it was just cattle country that settlers and stage coaches rolled through.
Tiny capitalisation error,
That you describe his contacts in Elko and the bounty on Marshals so vividly that it
Same as before sentence is either incomplete or the ending refuses to appear in my browser window.
Finally, I also like to know what exactly you have to do to be able to romance Yiska in chapter five, because so far it I can’t discern the pattern (have got it to appear just once like the other poster).
Glad to hear chapter six is progressing, keep up the good work.
Also will we get another chance at Yiska in this chapter when we cannot trigger his romance in chapter five?
It is the chapter two gunfight where this occurs and it is not common I’ve only seen it a few times when testing.
I’m having a problem with the scripting for the evidence when you’re trying to reveal Steele as an imposter. I got the telegraph evidence of the real Steele but if I fail to convince the crowd in the saloon the first time and restart then the telegraph choice suddenly gets grayed out.
@ AllenGies
Possible inconsistent capitialization
“Why, aren’t You just chock full of charity.” Should read: “Why, aren’t you just chock full of charity.”
Managed to get the error I mentioned in Chapter two.
[Tumbleweed Jack pulls his iron in that same instant and gun-smoke fills the air as the two of you blaze away. Your pistol clears its holster cleanly. But even with him in your sights, the gunfighter can’t seem to pull his smoke-wagon free. Then the crack of a revolver rings out and Tumbleweed Jack clutches at a suddenly bloody hand and collapses amid the street. You follow the gun-smoke back to Miss Caraway and her twin pistols; one of which smokes and smolders like a pipe.
“What?” She asks and answers the obvious question. “He weren’t gonna back down without something to show for it.”]
Got something I cannot believe I’ve missed each time I’ve played
…Miss Caraway holds up her empty tumble to catch the dying light. Should be: …Miss Caraway holds up her empty tumbler to catch the dying light.
vampierkid222- To raise a character’s influence, there are conversation choices to be made and story choices to be selected. For example, Yiska is heavily influenced by how you settle the difficulties between the Shoshone Indians and the Red Ribbon mining company.
idonotlikeusernames- Good catches on those. They also led to a further tidying where Tumbleweed’s fate is concerned if you talk with him but don’t use the telegraph to arrange his fate. I will include all that in the next mini-update,
And as you suggested, there will now be an overt chance to romance Yiska in Chapter 6 if it was missed in Chapter 5.
Hellothere- Which restart are you talking about about? Did your character get killed by Steele and you went back to redo the scene? I might have missed a reset there.