Me neither if my experiences are true.
I’ve actually gotten a Lawyer-Doctor, but I think it was in a pre-update demo.
Did another test “Bad Gal” test run.
Noticed a few glitches
“You heard about the Red Ribbon Miners?” Matthew asks, “people are saying they were hit my Indians.” should be: “You heard about the Red Ribbon Miners?” Matthew asks, “people are saying they were hit by Indians.”
"You are mistaken. I have the appointment to Lander county. Should be: “You are mistaken. I have the appointment to Lander county.”
"After the assassination of Ambraham Lincoln by the actor John Wilkes Booth… Should be: "After the assassination of Abraham Lincoln by the actor John Wilkes Booth…
"Let’s talk about what comes next for you. Should be: “Let’s talk about what comes next for you.”
And some double sentences:
["Those were Mister and Misses George Gantz. Or they will be once they get properly married. As it turns out, Tahoma, a saloon keeper can’t join two people in matrimony no matter how much whiskey everyone drinks. “The Gantz’s need to be married again. It turns out, Tahoma, that a saloon keeper can’t join two people in matrimony no matter how drunk they all are.”]
I’m still seeing the looping when you select Tumbleweek Jack when you are accusing Marshall Steele of being an imposter.
@AllenGies i like your game but i dont like the form you present the spanish noblewoman is better you say is mexican isnt credible like spanish, believe me im spanish. And you make some orthografical mistakes. For instance, you call her body guards guardaispaldas is guardaespaLdas.
No doctor lawyers but maybe it would be nice if you could mention leaving behind a medical practice or even a hospital or university job to Steele at the beginning, since the option for your character to have had their own law practice is already there.
Also completed a Schmidt playtrough recently and found a redundant sentence error.
“It takes only a little while for the old Prospector to saddle back up and, with laden mule in tow, begin the journey north and east to where the river flows down.”
"It takes only a little while for the old Prospector to saddle back up and, with laden mule in tow, begin the journey north and east to where the river flows from. "
These two sentences are placed right after one another and convey essentially the same bit of information, therefore one of them is likely redundant in this case.
“Struggle against the your bonds.” In this dialogue option right at the beginning isn’t the word “the” redundant in this case?
@MaraJade Acutally its not better to call her a mexican because shes not mexican, she doesn’t come from Mexico, if anything the PC should get the impression that shes Espanic since where she is from is unknown at lest until Maria informs the PC where shes from.
I dont say she its mexican @Cloudian im saying she is not credible spanish noblewoman , she would be a more credible mexican
How is she not a credible Spanish noble woman?
In first place in this time,noblewoman couldnt be wandering alone in another country. And political marriage was pacted 14 or 15, the woman had to be father or husband permise to left spain and never alone. And in spain people dont say all his names is a mexican or latinoamerican costum
Well then that stuff can be fixed. Plus shes not traveling alone duh theres the freaking monks with her.
Cloudian in spain virgininity in this time was enormus importance same to infidelity chance. Never go alone with a family male or husband even the husband could denunce her for a minimal suspicion honor de sangre, she could end in jail or killed for family honor. It was a horrible time to be a woman
*In a sarcastic tone* Noooo it sounded like a great time for women.
And I doubt that monks would break their oaths for a mere mortal woman. Plus AllenGies can add in another character that accompanied her, like her older brother. And/or AllenGies can change it where Maria was sent with monks and nuns to become a nun since her only suitor died and she is too old to go to the ball thing to find obtain another suitor and her family didn’t want to deal/worry about her.
Yes there is like think works nun or married woman. Or widow, there were the only woman with a little fredom always they had children if not they force to remarry or they be like recluses in her father home
Talon5505- Well, Chapter 5 ends after you deal with Steele. I plan to write up to Chapter 8 and include a final wrap up of things after your tenure of Marshal is completed.
Matteller- I really should learn to use the *comment instead of of the double parentheses for internal notes. And good catch on the washboard. It appears randomly but is only supposed to be select-able once.
Is chapter 5 the farthest so far?
Bloodwyche- Good catches on those. Can’t believe I miss-spelled Abraham Lincoln’s name. Also the Tumbleweed Jack loop; it is not a good idea to let players build up infinite evidence (And also possibly Law or Order points). 
idonotlikeusernames- Fixing the duplication line as we speak. And you are right. I should add the Doctor option at the beginning. That is where it belongs.
But still no Doctor-Lawyers. There have to be some limits…
I have a question about yiska. What does the word motsqueh mean? Or is it something you haven’t decided yet?
MaraJade and Cloudian- I like the discussion you are having concerning Maria. That there is a difference of opinion means I need to write the character more clearly.
I think the real trouble is that Maria’s back-story is more than a bit tangled. She was going to be a nun. But then her sister died and her Father decided to make a match of her and so called her back from the convent before she could take her vows.
She threw herself into the idea of the marriage, falling in love with her husband to be who, while older, was only in his mid-thirties. Alas, he had a heart attack (aggravated by his layers of finery he chose to wear to honor his bride) almost immediately after the ceremony (While walking from the Altar hand in hand with Maria in fact).
As you might imagine, the death of the husband created an enormous rift between the two families. No children, no consummation of the marriage, and yet it was sealed before God which meant that Maria would possibly acquire a sizable portion of her Husband’s estate.
Rather than wait for the courts to grind through to a decision… or petition the King or Pope to intervene (A bad idea for the other family since Maria had corresponded recently with the King concerning replacing the altar at the convent, a story in and of itself), the other family decided instead to arrange the untimely demise of the virgin widow.
Naturally, Maria’s family disliked this notion and so, after the first failed assassination, her father sent her off to the ends of the earth to protect her amid the anonymity of the Americas. The Uto-Aztecan language had intrigued Maria while studying the campaigns of Cortez, and so she chose to become involved in the effort to set up a hermitage in Nevada; neatly managing to hide in the wilderness, promote worship and continue her studies.
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So, should I add in a male family member to accompany Maria? (Assuming her loyal bodyguard and the Monks are not enough) This chaperon would have to be someone who wouldn’t draw attention if he were to up and leave (That might give the Assassins a chance to find Maria), and also be someone who could be induced to look the other way while the Player’s character meets with Maria. (At least for Chapter 5. He can be an impediment later on to the rising Romance)
I’m willing to take suggestions on this. A drunkard of an Uncle down on his luck? A Mexican Cousin who wants to establish a gold mine in Nevada?
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Talon5505- I’m writing chapter 6 right now. Slow going, mainly on account of the looming holiday (Thanksgiving).
Spidergirl-Motsqueh is an actual Indian word. Specifically a Nez Perce name for a familiar animal, the chipmunk.