I honestly can’t think of a way to fix it that won’t mess with my plans.
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Since people are talking about the transition to the flashback, an easy way to make it clearer could be adding something like ‘As sleep takes you, you start to remember’ after ‘This is your go-to method to just clear your head, you close your eyes as the various thoughts flash through your head and the biggest one is what would Ashford do.’.
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I will see how it goes.
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Well, I gave you all I can think of for now if I think of anything else, I’ll let you know, but don’t hold your breath
thank you for what you have given me, and no problem.
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Another late night post, but good news is that all the evil in my life is gone now and I am back to 100%.
So in other news, Samantha’s new name is Skye and they will remain a girl, because that changes will affect more than I thought.
In other news, answer this vote that has no bearing on the story, I just want to know if I am insane or not.
- Add a milf RO
- Do not add a milf RO.
- I refuse to partake in a vote that has no meaning.
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at the cost of my sanity and the sub ROs, the milf RO will be added eventually. they will have a child and the child will hate you.
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I like your IF and good story, not to mention i do like supernatural theme too. Great work author cannot wait for next the update. Oh and i like Irene😁 her personality very unique😁
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Thank you for the kind words, the update is coming but when is very subjective, and RAAAAHHH, IRENE SWEEEP.
Anyways, what parts did you really like/didn’t like. I know the wip is short but looking for parts to improve.
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I like them all author😁maybe the most common is in terms of being polished like wip in general that’s all the rest I like😊 by the way will you add full and detailed customization for the MC later? and also for 18+ content will it be very explicit or fade to black?
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Currently due to my bumness, the character customization is spaced out to when its relevant, instead of just dropping it all in the beginning.
The 18+ content will be both explicit and fade to Black, I will add an option for both
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Are you going to add more Male love interest? Cuz so far I’m so into the main story but not interested in the female love interests, especially it feels like shonen harem anime with how annoying they keep clinging to the MC.
That bully Irene take the crown of the worst girl in existence, kinda sad how they’re no option to avoid her through the whole story.
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You take that back, Irene is the best RO in this entire game 
(Each to their own)
I am a bit of a bum and of the 7 planned love interests, only two are male. I can only blame myself for this transgression.
I am a fraud of a writer, not much can be done there besides slow improvement.
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Personally I love that vibe. You can’t please everyone.
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Because I can’t be trusted and I can trust myself, we will be holding a vote on this unique situation that my brain created.
With the seventh RO, I went through some simulations for what I want with their character and how I would integrate them with the story and came for these results.
- 43 Year old Milf RO, her storyline involves the yakazua.
- Teen Mom RO, her storyline involves her race and other factors.
- Gender selectable RO, it will be trippy and meta. thats all I will say here.
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This poll will end in 24 hours give or take, please vote for what you feel like, if you have any questions then I will selectively answer without spoilers.
Also the update is coming soon ish, projected to be 30k+.
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One MILF please. But to be honest for some reason your the only one that actually gives MILF RO a chance. In my many years reading IF I never have encountered a MILF as a proper RO. I never really noticed the lack of MILF either. Only when you give the options to vote did I notice the lack of MILF in IF.
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I mean technically two of the three options are milfs, just one is a more traditional milf.
Right the fantasy genre thing could be the reason why most authors don’t describe an older RO as MILF since vampires, elf or other fantastical creatures could live long but still be considered young. Or it’s just the word MILF is too loaded or prude since it could include MC stealing someone else wife.
Removing all the bastardization that comes with the internet, milf just means mother I would like to fuck.
The only qualifying factor is that the person is a mother, so vampires, elfs etc can be milfs at whatever point.
For some milf became linked to the idea of a mature woman and not really a mother.
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Tallying the votes of this poll on both discord and here. From least voted to most voted
43 year old milf RO with 15 votes.
Gender selectable RO with 16 votes.
And staggeringly, teen mom RO with a 22 votes.
The unlikely runner-up in my eyes has won, they will make their grand appearance in act 2 of the prologue.
Thanks to everyone to making their voice heard.
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