I’m still getting the indentation error 
it’s line 6448 I think. It says indentation expected to be 4 but is 3, so I can’t progress further into the demo 
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You just updated when I was reading? 
I can’t tell you why I find that funny.
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Thank you for telling me the exact line, I fixed the *goto line. Could you please take time out of your weekend and try again to see if it’s working now? Pretty please? 
Can i borrow your humour? Because all these errors make me wanna cry 
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Sorry, you are about to cry more because I encountered another error during the angel chain scenes when I picked the dialogue option
“My fire”.
I will comfort you by saying, I like your story.
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And I will return the favour by saying thank you, and that I have fixed the error.
Tried it and all seems to be in working order! Good luck in developing your IF, I’ll definitely be following!!!
Eithnes strong emotions for the MC is still something I cant comprehend lol cos she was pretty disrespectful to the MC at first
Even Loki is relatively calm
Kinda felt for Orestes tho ngl
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I thought he was an undead a-hole tbh. Kinda wish we got a vampire vs werewolf fight with him since we’re playing as the wolf.
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Just wanted to say, that I like the story and characters very much. Especially impressed by Eithne, her fae heritage really showing, and her confrontation with Loki I’ve re-read thrice just for the feelings there.
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoy it.
All I’ll say is that there’s a few things at play, plus the feather 
I admit to wanting to write a vampire v werewolf fight, but I decided to give Eithne a moment to shine.
Fixed it. Thanks for the screenshots.
Thank you. I’m glad you like the characters, and I’m glad Eithne stands out for you. I tried to keep her heritage vague, so I enjoyed writing the scene with Loki where her true self leaks out.
Loki is flattered
Can you try it now, please? I just uploaded the demo.
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By the way, can I just say that I adore Loki? 
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Yay, it works, thanks 
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I can’t wait for more updates I’m in love with this story I love the difference POV and how emotionally it is with the people reading it keep up the amazing work on it 
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you’re enjoying it. The next update is almost ready, and will be out when I finally have time to finish it.
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Im gonna be honest: This was a total absolute masterpiece! Absolute LEGEND Thanks god I found this 
! Honestly my complaints are more like requests to expand ROs like add some more, some average people who you saved like a reporter/detective, or an angel just like you like an old friend. Just more ROs will do the story nicely. Overall I enjoyed this thoroughly and will be going high above my top booked stories. I will have my eye on this for a long time. 
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