The Wight King(WIP - REVAMPED) Shattered demo released at post 3315 (10/01/2018)

adult-fiction
science-fantasy

#3338

Damn. It’s been two weeks already? XD

I’ve continued working on it during what time I could take away from studying, and I’m at about 25000 words. There’s really only the ending of the demo left for me to write. Then as soon as I finish the demo’s content I’m going to release it and improve the writing afterward, because it’s going to go much quicker with your feedback to help.


#3339

Don’t lie, you were playing Spider Man like everyone else right?


#3340

I got you my dude

edit: Just realized how old that post was RIP lol


#3341

Cries in no ps4

I hate exclusivities.

Still counts. XD


#3342

I just have one thing to say (spoilers!):

A CEMETERY OF BLADES!! <3

I love this game so far, can’t wait to see where it’s headed.


#3343

Since I’m going to release Shattered’s demo pretty soon, could a moderator tell me if it would be better to let people post here and make the thread a “Wight King and (temporarily) Shattered” thread. Or would it be better to keep the discussion on another thread?

@Eiwynn or anyone?


#3344

Since the “Shattered” story is different, I think it would be o.k. to have a separated thread. People might be confused if they see posts about both in the same thread.

It ultimately is up to you though.

PS: I am not a moderator - just a “leader” which means anything I say can be ultimately over-ruled - if it is not ok, a moderator would be able to recombine the threads and close the other one as well.


#3345

Oh. I thought you were, I stand corrected. Well you still have a bigger cap than mine so I trust your advice. XD

That’s what I thought as well. I thought of making the demo open to the people already here first because it still needs a lot of work, but in the end it might be kind of meaningless since anyone would have access to it anyway.

So either another thread or a big shared pm thing?


#3346

It really is up to you - if it needs a lot of work a PM thread might keep it from getting too many non-topical posts. Not that the Wright King thread ever derailed, huh? :wink:

Public post would get more eyes on it but they may not be as dedicated as those seeking to work with you.


#3347

Uh…
Wipes the memes under the rug.
There. :blush:

I haven’t yet reedited it entirely, so I don’t expect the writing to be of the same quality as The Wight King. There must still be typos left, as well as my trademark weird phrasing.

Exactly. It’s not like I want everyone to be constructive. But I feel like this story needs more constructivity and dedication, at least in the early stage.


#3348

Yeah, you guys have a history :blush:

Good thing I’m safe then, since I’ve never derailed the thread and clearly have pointed out the most errors.

Plus you could always do both anyway.

The reason I got one was for Bloodborne. :blush:


#3349

Can WK bring back animals from the dead? Like can we kill a dragon, make it undead, then ride it into battle?


#3350

Stop rubbing awesome games I won’t be able to play for at least two more years in my face. XD

Yes.


#3351

I intended to get a play station so I could play Bloodborne but realized I shouldn’t spend several hundred dollars just to play one game. At least until I get a job or a very generous Christmas present from my grandparents.


#3352

Yo. Got too sick of waiting so I decided to release the demo for Shattered now. It’s not complete yet, but anyway, it should be enough material to work on.

I made a pm thread for it, and sent invites to those people I remembered, because I don’t know if there’s any more efficient way to invite people.

If you didn’t get a link to the thread, ask me by pm to send you one.

In the meantime I’ll post Shattered’s demo here as well, so that you don’t have to wait until I invite you to the pm.
https://dashingdon.com/play/bl00dragon/shattered-the-bliss-of-ignorance/mygame/index.php?cb=22978

EDIT: The idea of a private thread was abandoned because of the limits to the number of people that could join, instead I have made a public thread:


#3353

I’ve sent a few invites, since it’s pretty late I’m going to stop for now and wait for people to ask a link.

You don’t have to be on the pm to play the demo, but I’d prefer feedback to be posted there, so don’t feel like you have to.


#3354

The shattered demo was pretty solid I must say.


#3355

I loved that demo the fighting scenes were so gritty.


#3356

Thank you. But if you don’t mind I’d like discussions about the game to more concentrated on the pm thread. I don’t mind that much, but it would be confusing to new readers to suddenly see posts talking about another game entirely.

Do you want to be invited there?

Glad to hear that. I wanted the Shattered fight scenes to be even more gritty than those of the Wight King, becayse of the differences between the two characters.


#3357

Are we always gonna be an elf?