So I am now a new fan of your WIP. My interest in this game is definitely piqued and I cannot wait to see what more you have in store. Your prologue was definitely fleshed out but I felt like it covered alot for an introduction to the world you have built here.
I especially enjoyed the possible previous relationship that is apparent between the MC and Asterius, the brief recognition gave me goosebumps. I am super excited to see what parts the MC has played and what their role is in the rebellion (If they played a role at all) and if the MCs real history dates back even further in History! Self discovery is a must for any MC so i cant wait to uncover it.
The inclusion of races or at the very least elven influence is a well thought out addition. Through the majority of my playthroughs I was more inclined to play the role of the half elf as I felt like it would offer me more in terms of story driven play. I cant help but wonder and be excited to see what kind of lore comes along with this and what kind of influence this will have on the MCs interactions with the outside world. Will they be seen as trash for their race? Will their half human half elven heritage gain them even more enemies simply for their half breed nature?! I am super excited for how this plays out !.
I do hope to see traces of other races though! Elven and Human are the ones I currently am aware of and after looking through the character list and seeing Vampire, Banshee and even Annie (who I can only assume isnt entirely human either after still being alive after her beating) with her “Unknown” origin.
In those first few pages I was definitely getting a sense of an anime named Overlord which worried me but as I read on the worries were replaced by the fear that the preview/demo would end soon! I look forward to future updates and cannot wait to see more and more lore added to the page.