I didn’t know that happened!!
rushes to replay F’s route again
I didn’t know that happened!!
rushes to replay F’s route again
Yes, F’s route is actually very diverse. It’s fantastic.
sooo…here it goes…
I think the vromance changed order in my heart again lol
Ava is at the top .
Nat is second
LT is on third
Farrah is fourth .
well from Book 1 , LT was at the top y’know…lol
ohh ava…omg…I wish I had someone I could nudge during reading the demo…nudge everyone in the thread…She…S M I L E D O MG…Screeeeeeeech…almost made me wish the mc was a paparrazzi…and snap shot at that smile…how about that for decoration ? Ava smiles on every wall ? not creepy at all !
Ava is tugging hard at my heart string , its Samara all over again…
Nat…the chevalier in shining armor… you just wanna jump in her arms and say ‘twirl me around alreaddy I hear the wedding bells ringing !’’ …hey thats from someone who dont believe in marriage cough whatcha looking at ? insanity moment…move on!
Farrah , omg…her route is just so funny and a delight !! I got this though that if MC first kiss gonna be from Farrah and none else . cose she was sooo smoochable in the demo…you just wanna pepper her with kisses…what ? its totaly Legit…she is freaking Adowable !
Oh I did M route but beside the part where she hole you on her shoulder which was funny like hell…there is nothing there still .
I loved the difference in the scene with Tina and Verda .
I also loved the scene with Bobby .
I kinda find douglas crush creepy lol . I mean how old is he anyway ? Biebbbbbber! Lol
I also liked tid bit about the unit background . I laughed when farrah said ‘I just fall trough a portal’ …I was like…i can believe that lolol poor Nat…she was an elfish fish…I mean…her story remind me of that for some reasons lol .
I can’t wait for the carnaval ! We gonna get cotton candy and it be sticky and we get Smoochie Wooot!
So there you have it…
The demo is awesome!!!
Here is my list of ROs :
First is Mason
Second is LT
Third is Nate
Fourth is Felix
And last is Adam
Mason’s flirting was to good to be beaten
It’s actually passers-by, but that’s a particularly weird grammatical thing.
Because it’s being used as a proper noun, the capitalization is correct.
IIRC, Douglas is 18.
I’ve only gotten to give it one good run through thus far, so I’m sure I’ll have more impactful feedback later, but as of right now, I really enjoyed it. The only thing that bugged me at all was that my immediate thought upon discovering the contagion was, “Hmm, new people appear in town and suddenly everyone’s sick, it’s probably starting with the carnival,” long before the MC realized it, and being realistic, that’s not really an issue. I’m reasonably confident it would’ve been my go-to thought in real life, as well, but I also went through a phase reading up on plagues because I’m fun at parties, and that’s sort of an abnormal thing.
This demo is going to get me through so much homework. I love the difference in Douglas if he’s got a crush vs. if he doesn’t. Also everything else, but I wanted to point that out.
what is…this ?
The new stranger stands before me with head bowed. When I inch a step forwards, they gaze at me warmly.
Brown eyes meet mine, and the shadow no longer scares me.
Isn’t that your chosen RO? I changes depending who you romanced.
ohhhhhhhh…for real ???
lol I read that as a dude show up XD hence why I assumed…lolol…cose all the romance are female for meh…Doh moment there lol . Thnx for clarifying for meh.
As resuri said, that description is your RO. That one you have belongs to N, for F, is something like they look at your with curiosity with golden eyes, so on, so on.
He’s 19. He was 19 on the first book, but two months have passed so he’s either still 19 or just turned 20. I guess he’s still 19 though.
I’m late but sort of a suggestion, I don’t know if somebody said that already… But about the nickname/name stuff (can I say this or should I blurry it?), I’d rather to pick who can my detective by their name and who is better to keep saying “detective”. Like, I’m good with F calling them by their name but I barelly have any friendship with A and M. Even with A sticking to calling them Detective either way, my detective gave all of them the freedom to call them Alex, something I can’t imagine actually happening.
Just a comment tho, I know it’s already too much that we have this option and surelly it’d give Sera an even worse time to deal with the coding.
I love to be able to pick who’s trying to go for a kiss, N or the Detective. Even with nothing happening, that’s what makes this game so amazing <3
Dang it, I was close.
This is a repost:
One year later After finally getting to play the first book and the demo of book two and reading the questions on Tumblr, I think I can do a review of book one. I’ll try to keep it to things that can be improved on in the future books and not the first book.
In my opinion:
Based on routes:
I mainly made this post because I felt like I was coming off rude in an ask I sent to you and I wanted to explain it more clear since what I wrote was probably a confused mess, so my apologies and if you still want to answer it that’s fine, I really want to hear your response since I might have read some of your answers wrong. I also don’t hate the characters, and I won’t go out and harras people who have different opinions than me, this is all fiction after all.
While we’re talking about opinions, I would like to hear other people opinion, maybe I will able to see some things from another angle.
It’s not so much a complaint or a problem, and as someone who can’t write for shit and has a crappy imagination, I don’t like suggesting to a writer, especially one as talented as you, what could possibly “improve” a scene… but here goes. When you meet verdas family, and you’re romancing A, Verdas daughter goes up to N and they have what could be a very touching/foreshadowing scene. That is, IF you were romancing N. So I did it again, this time pursuing N(was gonna do it anyway haha), but the kid went up to A instead that time… it felt pretty disappointing, and like a missed opportunity… maybe this was intentional on your part(I assume so considering anyone but your RO will get this scene), but it still felt like a missed opportunity to me, I feel like it would really let the detective see their RO(and them you) in a different light at a pretty crucial stage in their “relationship”
Again, I have no idea what I’m talking about, but that’s just the feeling I got when I was reading that… and it just felt like an important moment, you know.
that scene is random I think . cose I saved at that point and reloading and got all of them XD
If that’s true I must have gotten really unlucky, because I tried with all 5 “paths”, and each time anyone but the RO/s did it. Damn.
I never considered doing it again with the same one though…
You were indeed “unlucky” as it was random, but I quite like having it that way. I don’t think every single interaction needs to be focused on the RO. It’s nice to let the others shine a moment too.
I agree, it just felt like that specific interaction could have been a pretty “key moment”, or w/e you call it… it’s just what went through my mind as I was reading that part. And I was probably already anticipating it without realizing it, so the disappointment when it didn’t happen was just very… clear? I guess… if that makes sense.
Thanks for the comments and bug catches and things, guys!
I’ll be updating the demo again after it’s fully edited. Nothing new will be added, it’ll just be the edits, bug fixes, prounoun issues, etc. Just things to make it run smoother
Just a quick note to say I’ll be away now until Monday 3rd, and likely still won’t be on the forums much after that. Things are getting very hectic at work now until the end of the year. Though there will still be an update on Tumblr as usual this week as well as asks I have scheduled too!
Hope everyone has a wonderful rest of the week!