The Wayhaven Chronicles: Book Two (WIP)- Full Demo Now Out!

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#614

Fabulous idea. :+1:


Here is the thread for general discussion. Please direct further debate/discussion to that thread so that this thread can stay more focused on feedback.


#615

Throw sugar cubes at A, it should probably work


#616

I like playing shy because real world I can;;t take being flirt on my face will go red if someone tried


#617

The Full Demo is NOW OUT! It includes Chapters 1-6!

DEMO LINK: https://dashingdon.com/go/3377

I truly hope you guys enjoy it! :slight_smile:

Also, for anyone interested, my Patreon Page is also now out:

And now I’m off to try and calm myself down and not get too overly nervous, hehehe ;D Hope everyone has a fantastic weekend!


#618

you made my day boss :cat:


#619

ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod


#620

Thank you so much! So excited!!


#621

OH MY GOD HERE IT IS!!! :heart:


#622

Wow this’ll be a wild ride, I’m so excited!!


#623

Is it going to be rude if I ask you how many chapters did you plan for the 2nd book @Seraphinite


#624

It’ll be 19-21 chapters, depending on how writing goes :slight_smile:


#625

I just died from reading this.


#626

Yes, enduring today gets rewarded


#627

On that scene where Ava waited me and walking me home, after lifting the trees… she was supposed to face me while talking to me right ? Then the supernatural’s hand touch me and i Scream before Ava step in front of me… i am thinking how would Ava miss them in the first place until they touch me , since Ava was looking at me and thus should saw them right? It looks weird for them able to appear behind me unnotice by Ava …perhaps i miss read the scene ? :slight_smile:


#628

The vampires are just very distracted by the detective. :smirk:


#630

I would love to be your beta tester in the future. Wayhaven is my favorite HG. _


#631

So this sentence here:

The remaining natural light which does filter through the trees dotted at intervals down the street

This is possibly me not being a native speaker, but it sounds so… Strange to me, it took me a while to understand what was being said here, so I don’t know if you would like to rephrase that to make it more simple :thinking:

Again, I don’t know if that is already simple, but it was confusing for me.


#632

Don’t worry. This is good feedback and something to take into consideration. :slightly_smiling_face:


#633

After a moment, they begin to speed up, like the the excited heartbeat of a predator

Catched this too!


#634

So, I just noticed that the ‘I head to my own car happily enough’ choice increases the ‘Mind’ stat by 5%, I’m not sure if that should be the case? Isn’t that kind of implying that we cannot quite genuinely love and be satisfied with our Hatchback? I’m not a native English speaker either so I may be misinterpreting, and I know stats don’t matter as much but it’s just a little thing I thought I’d point out.