LOVING THIS WORK!! I replay the demo probably once a month at least. The characters are all wonderful and feel different from eachother. I also like the POV changes. We still have control over the MC but it is nice seeing what other characters think/feel. I think you handled those wonderfully.
The subtle differences between scenes and their different RO’s play out really well. I like how they each react differently to small things, like the MC’s voice when they leave them a message.
I’m dissapointed there we have to wait so long for a romance to fully set in!!! Ha ha, but that is just because I’m impatient and my MC just wants to rip Ava’s clothes off already!
I do have a question. You said a love triangle would be possible between the MC, Ava, and Nat. Is this a true love triangle? (Which implies that Ava and Nat also have feelings for eachother?) Or will it be the more common form of love triangle, which my gf and have decided on a more accurate term, a love-line? (where it is just the MC in the middle, having feelings for both.) Also, will there be confrontation or jealousy scenes where there is some conflict generated from this?
Thanks for writing this awesome work and I cannot wait for more!! I mean, I will, but it will just be painful! Ha ha.