@childnapper - Probably being snarky or angry is about as far as it will go for dialogue. Well, you can sometimes be an ass to Unit Bravo if they’re being an ass to your MC Being horrible to people will only turn them against the MC, and that would be difficult for the story. If it was just one book, it might work OK, but these characters have to be together for a long time, so turning everyone against the MC would work against the plot- but yeah, at certain times the MC can be a bit more… brash, lol.
@deznutes - Yeah, it can take quite a while to write and code an interactive fiction But, it really is worth the struggle! If you can keep going with it, it’s such an awesome sense of accomplishment.
It’s so cool seeing everyone discuss the romances and their preferences I really wanted quite varying choices for the romance interests, just because I knew there would be some that wouldn’t suit everyone. So, hopefully, most people can find one that they can fall for I’m really excited for where they’re going to go!
I’m back to it today after a weekend refresh- I’m determined to finish that second branch of Chapter 9! Then I can edit and play-test through it all again before finally getting onto Chapter 10 (I’ll try and post a not-too-spoilery snippet sometime this week). Man, Chapter 9 has been a long one to write, but it does set-up a lot of stuff.
Hope everyone had a lovely weekend and here’s to a productive week!