Ok guys -
Please keep the conversation focused on the story-game in question and family-friendly orientated.
The author is serious about publishing her game and is seeking the community’s input on her story. Providing suggestions and constructive criticism is far different then placing demands on the author and harassing her.
Romance wars in threads like this should only be pursued if the author explicitly o.k.s it. Otherwise it can be seen as breaking forum guidelines if excessive.
Please be considerate of the community, the author who is trying to get her work published and the administrative staff that runs this community.
I never thought this thread would need this type of post.