For the past several months I’ve been toying with the idea of finally writing a book about my experiences in the military. At the beginning, the book started out as a way for me to write about my personal experiences. However, recently I have since decided I want to focus more on what happens AFTER recruits finish their training and have to deal with actual war.
Currently it’s about 52,000 words, my current military position allows me to hopefully update it around once a week (At least i’ll try).
Right now it’s still gender-locked-male but I hope to change that towards the end of the process.
I would like to hear some opinions on the style, tempo and theme as well as any grammar mistakes you can find (English isn’t my first language).
To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/go/5579
- A little bug fixing during name selection
*Added another chapter
*Added to the glossary
*Some minor details fixed to not contradict the glossary
*Added another two operations