Sine the introductory post says that you want help with language, here are 2 points that stick out at me.
A person BORROWS something FROM another person, who in turn LENDS it TO another. But you have this same transaction expressed incorrectly as: A person BORROWS something FROM another person, who in turn BORROWS it TO another.
A person compliments another person for good manners, and is complimented by another person for good clothing, but complements an outfit with a hat, which complements the clothing. You, incorrectly, write about a person complementing another person for a good quality.
“Our descendants, they… they fought each other during the Annexation War…”
should be
“Our ancestors, they… they fought each other during the Annexation War…”
Curtsying is a feminine form of respect. Men bow to each other.
What should be done with the name of the mother, when the player isn’t randoming a character? It recently came to my attention that it is always “Anne” if you create your character from scratch.
The mother’s name should always be randomized.
The mother’s name should be a fixed one, just not the one it currently is (a new poll would be made to decide which one).
The mother’s name should be decided by the player, even if the mother is barely mentioned.
They carry shields and swords, maces, spears, axes and whatever else there is there to thrust and swings against someone.
should be
They carry shields and swords, maces, spears, axes and whatever else they can use to thrust and swing against someone.
I would say 95%, and it has been that way for a long time. The thing is that I’ve changed the scope of the project a while ago, and then I kept adding new things to it. It has been very close to completion for a while now.
Can it work like this
They carry shields and swords, maces, spears, axes and whatever else there is to thrust and swings against someone. The width of their lines occupies almost half of the valley, a huge wave of about three thousand men in blue.
As a “figure of speech”?
At least it was my original intention with that specific choice of words. The second “there” was a mistake probably added while revising, but the phrase itself has always been “whatever else is there” or “whatever else there is” in my mind.
That helps, I’ll take a look.
EDIT: Did you had a bastard? Not having child should add + 280 days to your totaldays pool before the summit. If you have a bastard, it adds only 100. I’ll raise those two numbers just in case.
I had an issue where I could no longer hold court. It’s been a while since I last played so I don’t know if it is intentional, but a did skip a few months because of it and maybe that’s why I finished the game in less than a year?
@MahatmaDagon I’ve never paid much attention to this until now, but why MC’s cousin is not present at the wedding? I think it’s a lack of respect with his Liege.
Hello I found something strange in the final confrontation with Lord Noyedas Sielcner I sent them to shoot them in the woods and destroyed the dam I did not send any knights and when they attacked me from the back I shot arrows and when they loaded my 300 knights 299 died for the 25 of Noyedas is an error or are they an elite group of kiritos?