Oh wow, i see we had an update… I am pretty happy about the new variety in gender and sexuality, it’s important to people.
I just finished it, and what a cliffhanger, that one… XD
Oh, where to begin… The humor, the writing, the setting, the characters… I just love it all! At first i thought it would turn out pretty messy, because you would be trying to make something of a visual medium on a written one… But it turns out you did a pretty good job with the narrative, it makes the theme really unique and fun! The only thing that makes the story feel off for me is: why is the camera almost always following us, when Caiden is it’s creator? I suppose he would like to record our moments together, but i would feel pretty creeped out being observed by that thing even when he isn’t there. It’s just a minor inconvenience though, i thing that is sometimes at the back of my mind, doesn’t break the narrative or anything. ‘u’
Besides making extra sure the stats description feels proportional to the number(i still felt like some of them were slightly off, but maybe thats just me) i don’t think i can give many recomendations, you already look pretty capable.
Something i would like to ask is, will we have an ample possibility of relationship with our god? I just love master/servant dynamics, be it friendly, professional, or even romantic, and i like having all these options ^^
I finally got around to finishing the demo. I’m so intrigued to find out more! Awesome job! I like so many of the ROs I know multiple playthroughs will be in order, but I think Bo’s my favorite. Loved flirting with him in drama
I found a couple bugs, but I wasn’t looking for them so I didn’t notice anymore.
Bo was my roommate this time (as you can also see… lol)
Just a small thing but I also noticed in drama, when you choose the “i don’t know what came over me” option after the scene, it says +Shy and I think it’s supposed be +Reserved instead since I don’t recall Shy being a stat.
Winner Winner Chicken Dinner! This is now one of my favorites choice games out here, I love the 3rd person ish way you are telling the story it give you so many cool things you can do with it. I love the characters, I love the customisation that you can have with your character and I love the fact that we are bassicly a God I love games that make you something you can’t be like a superhero or a God because adds the funnest to it. BTW I picked a Cerberus because it’s from one of my favorite video games now all I need is you to put in ice element nun-chucks that turn into a fire staff and lighting chains and if you get the reference I now love you lol this is amazing keep up the awesome work I can’t wait to see this grow
Thank you so much, It’s important to me that everyone feels like the game has reached its capacity with features. Or to be more simple, that everyone has something they enjoy!
But the narrative was a risky move and I’m glad it worked out!
You can ask Caiden this if you spend time with them when you don’t have class (or you skip it). They explain that they think the MC is far more interesting and that it was MC’s idea to record. (There’s also something else there that I can’t spoil yet, but it will be seen next chapter.)
I am sorry though if it made anyone uncomfortable or anything of the sorts, that was not my intent.
Awww thank you, I tried my best and I will continue to do so until it’s perfect owo
The god relationship can change yes and it can become strong. But never at a romantic level since the god is like their parent. You will see this far more next chapter!
Thank you so much for the very detailed and long feedback, I’m always trying to improve and I’m glad I have such nice people in this community to help me.
That has been a dream of mine too friend.
We’re all unicorns.
Thank you! That’s so niceeee of youuuu!! Bo seems to be a fan favourite so I’m very glad.
Will fix these, thank you.
No no, that’s supposed to be like that. In Romance scenes (basically scenes where romance can increase), you can gain the shy, flirt or naive option. This will change your character’s approach to Romance.
But thank you so much for the tips of the errors and the very nice comments!
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it so much, and technically the MC isn’t a god, but they are an angel of the god (the most powerful angel in fact, so I understand your point and completely agree).
I’m sorry but I don’t understand the reference but that sounds really cool!