Found some Typos and errors in my play-through.
It makes her wish that new serious matters would occur and distract him
(wish that some serious matter would)
You still wonder why does your existence make him uncomfortable that much?
(wonder why your existence makes him uncomfortable so much?)
Ser Albert, the one of the strongest knights
(Albert, one of)
“He’s the Prince,” Blair
(Should be He’s A Prince)
You’re on your way to return your room after full day spent on the training ground.
(You’re on your way to your room)
He’s so lost in deep thoughts that he passes through you without noticing
(passes by you)
focusing on the condition of Calethyia for too long that you
(Calethyia for so long that)
King Henry caresses your soft hair hair.
You still have a hope that you can change their minds.
(You still have the hope that you can)
The backside of the castle owns a beautiful garden.
(has a beautiful garden.)
you “bastard” since a long period of time.
(Give as a age so we can hate our siblings more.)
Everything is seems to get worse and worse in the condition of the kingdom.
Not only he’s the strongest knight in Calethyia,
(Not only is he the)
“We’re already in war with the kingdom of Masven.”
(at war with)
You furrow your brows and turn your head to look at the hunters who are watching you carefully.
(On this page one of the options is “Who did say that?”, it should probably be “Who said that?”)
You should’ve listened to hat voice.
I’m the son of King Henry and the Prince of this kingdom."
(and a Prince)
You name your horse Twice, once if you go out on the hunt, and again just before you leave the castle if you do.
If he stayed, her mother would find a way to get rid of him. $[name} saved himself.
(I got an entire Dialog with Leonora when i didn’t take her with me when i left.)
“This is horrible,” Eleanor comments, tears sparkle in her eyes.
“She made the right decision,”
All of you turn on your heel to stare at Leonora who has been listening to the conversation silently.
“She had to prove herself as a leader, correct?” Leonora pauses. “She made the right decision by killing the traitor.”
“She killed her own father, Leo,” Eleanor reminds her. She can’t believe the words that coming out of the little’s girls mouth.
“None of these is my fault,”
(It was an option on the page before)
As of right now i believe this is one of the WIP’s I’m waiting for the most. I just love it.