The Unwanted Warrior [UPDATED 10/2]

young-adult-fiction
low-fantasy
gender-choice

#1764

@Ritter Yeah no problem lol its all good


#1765

And the Plot thickens! I love this story and how it is developing and where it seems to be going. You are a wonderful and talented writer. Cant wait for the next update.


#1766

Oh god I’ve became so addicted the story is so perfect and well writen I want to see more of king Azra :slight_smile::heart::heart:


#1767

The plot thicken! I really hope that my MC doesn’t need to kill Queen Erica to get the throne. My MC just want to be a warrior. But… holy crap, first appearance of King Azra!
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#1768

Ohhhh nooooo, the ending revelation and it’s implications are killing me! But wait, does that mean that all Kingdom Rulers have magic? Cause ours didn’t, as far as we know, I wonder what that means for the future of Calethya And if Erica’s father was in love with Anna, but she was with the MC’s father…that’s pretty sad, I really want to find out more about Anna’s past now (much intrigue, such court, very romantic tragedy).

Also, Azra finally makes an appearance and I’m all for it :heart::eyes::heart:

Summary

Azra: sends 10 people, 11 counting that one warrior to their deaths and is feeling super smug about it
My dumb ass: I love one man :heart::heart::heart:


#1769

Well also before this there’s this weird sentence:


#1770

Oh I didn’t noticed it! Thanks for pointing that out mate, let’s hope the author see our posts so they can fix it. :smiley:


#1771


#1772

Thanks for letting me know :relaxed:

Thank you so much for your kind words. You inspire me a lot :blush:

No, that doesn’t mean that every kingdom ruler has a magic power. Only the leaders of Aithria have powers and that’ll be explained in the next updates.

Thanks for letting me know. It’s fixed :smiley:


#1773

So if the people of Aithria have always followed a ruler with magic, if something were to happen to the Queen and there was no one else like her but us…Interesting.


#1774

@NutellaQueen

Love the new stuff. Could you add violet for eye colors?


#1775

King azra and my male oc :slight_smile:


#1776

Looking forward to seeing more of King Azra!


#1777

OMG this story is getting better and better. I love it. The ending of what you’ve done so far is amazing. Besides all the minor spelling and grammar mistakes this is without a doubt my favorite wip


#1778

I just saw this post and breathing intensifies lol. I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!


#1779

Replaying this I noticed something.

Dried blood changes colors, so the “red paint” would only be red as it’s fresh, turning reddish brown to dark brown as the blood gets older.


#1780

Btw can we be villains later ? Or join another kingdoms


#1781

Be the one who brings the chaos


#1782

Hey @NutellaQueen if Katherine has a girlfriend, does this mean she cannot be romanced by a male MC?


#1783

Yes you can. She will hate your guts at first though.