what I found
She’s lucky to have you," Eleanor says in a whisper so Leonora can’t hear.
Just need quotation mark before She’s lucky to have you,"
This may just me, I found it weird that he says this twice, I suggest to make these slightly different.
- "How many times do I have to say that stay way from the swords?
I think this one is bug/glitch:
When choose “Help him up” I got this scene
While when choose “Wink at Eleanor” I got this
- You know, Alexander is older and stronger than you.But, I’m really glad that you have proven me wrong."
This one just need space, It’s should be you. But,
- James’s not so good at fighting, but he’s a good healer .
I don’t think space is needed here.
- I promised to him to make Alexander my successor.
This may just me, I found it weird that there two to
Also, I not kill the mother rabbit and take the little wolf to castle but I still can’t hug Abigail?
I like the new update, there a lot improvement in writing and new character! My questions is, are mc going to meet Blair again in future? How important is Blair? And can mc makes Leonora as queen?