Hey everybody! I wanted to go ahead and make the report that I more or less finished up the first of the changes I wanted to make to chapter 2- adding in the new scene.
Right now, it’s kind of brief, but I’m going to be adding an addendum here:
The way the scene is written now is a baseline. This is meant to be a scene where you are supposed to truly roleplay your character (or at least, should be able to really say what you want to, if you’re not a roleplaying sort).
That said, if there is a response you would like to have in the conversation that isn’t there, tell me and I will add it. If you want me to extend the conversation so you can explore different topics, tell me and I will add it.
I’ve just given this demo a go and gotta say it’s a very promising one, with great concept and well written: with just two typos I caught (whether mentioned to you already or not I’ve added screens) and one moment when the practicality of game making over in-game logic shows when we’re introduced to our team, which happens to be the exact people we randomly stumbled across and talked to when filling our free time
I’m glad you think so! And yeah, I know the lack of a nb option is kind of apparent. When I first started writing this, I didn’t really have the confidence to dip my toes into those waters. Even now in my other WIP, I was only confident to add a catch-all “Ambiguous” gender.
I dunno, I might retroactively add it in at some point. Still not confident about it.
Really appreciate that! I’m glad you think so!
I’ll get on the typos soon. There are also a good handful of typos and errors I know about that I still need to get on, too. I’ll try to get to it when time allows.
And sure, I’m not proud of the more game-y logic, but isn’t it at least worth a good chuckle?
Also, the option you pointed out that could be added is actually fascinating. I didn’t even consider it, honestly. If I were to add it, I would probably make it to where only characters with high intelligence would even have the option, tbh. And it would take a while to get done, since that would mean making tweaks to the end of chapter 2 and the beginning of chapter 3.
But it could be done, and it’s something to consider!
