# The Sword of Rhivenia: Book One (CHECK #3830) **URL:** \ **Category:** Hosted Games\ **Tags:** gender-choice, low-fantasy, young-adult-fiction\ **Created:** [March 14, 2021, 12:47pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496 "2021-03-14T12:47:38Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 2
**Author:** ![TheOfficer](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/theofficer/32/159663_2.png) [@TheOfficer](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/TheOfficer)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 5:39pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/21 "2021-03-14T17:39:08Z")
Saw the Unwanted Warrior question, and my heart cried. ---
**Author:** ![FutbolDude21586](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/dfb087/32.png) [@FutbolDude21586](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/FutbolDude21586)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 5:51pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/22 "2021-03-14T17:51:40Z")
I loved TUW. I cannot wait to see how this game develops. Question, though. You have two current Queens listed. Is polygamy legal in Rhivenia? > Queen Avelina - your mother and the current queen of Rhivenia. > Queen Isabelle - your step-mother and the current queen of Rhivenia. ---
**Author:** ![No\_This\_Is\_Patrick](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/no_this_is_patrick/32/223713_2.png) [@No\_This\_Is\_Patrick](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/No_This_Is_Patrick)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 5:52pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/23 "2021-03-14T17:52:13Z")
> [@Inkuro](#): > > Clara as my main RO just for that sweet angst(/˘◡˘) Angst is worst with Revna 😔 ---
**Author:** ![Sakinah\_Saraswati](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sakinah_saraswati/32/118835_2.png) [@Sakinah\_Saraswati](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Sakinah_Saraswati)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 5:54pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/24 "2021-03-14T17:54:40Z")
> [@NutellaQueen](#): > > Yes. Adopted children are also considered heirs. I’m sorry, I have a question. I already finish a route where Richard ended a new king and I chose Jarean as my partner, I did m/m, yet the story just finishes right after Richard announced a king, after that no marriage at all. Straight to end. May I have few advise for how to get married?. I’m sorry if my english doesn’t make any sense, I’m still high from the thrill :3 ---
**Author:** ![Eiriri](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/eiriri/32/126376_2.png) [@Eiriri](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Eiriri)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:01pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/25 "2021-03-14T18:01:34Z")
I’m so addicted with this that I can’t stop from reading it 😭 ---
**Author:** ![NutellaQueen](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/nutellaqueen/32/34552_2.png) [@NutellaQueen](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/NutellaQueen)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:02pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/26 "2021-03-14T18:02:51Z")
> [@FutbolDude21586](#): > > Is polygamy legal in Rhivenia? Yes, MC’s father has two wives. However, not every RO will agree to be in polygamous relationship. > [@Sakinah\_Saraswati](#): > > Richard announced a king, after that no marriage at all. Straight to end. It’s a demo, not full game. ---
**Author:** ![anon57188313](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/db5fbb/32.png) [@anon57188313](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/anon57188313)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:11pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/27 "2021-03-14T18:11:42Z")
> [@NutellaQueen](#): > > However, not every RO will agree to be in polygamous relationship. In the current demo though, the option to choose who you have feeling for is grayed out after you’ve already picked one, I guess it’d be different in the final version, or will you be locked out of other’s romance route? ---
**Author:** ![Murdockchan](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/murdockchan/32/274611_2.png) [@Murdockchan](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Murdockchan)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:12pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/28 "2021-03-14T18:12:05Z")
May I ask as to were there certain reasons to Charles being rather cold towards the MC? Also was it intentional for him to choose a brown mare for him instead of letting him to choose? ---
**Author:** ![No\_This\_Is\_Patrick](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/no_this_is_patrick/32/223713_2.png) [@No\_This\_Is\_Patrick](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/No_This_Is_Patrick)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:17pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/29 "2021-03-14T18:17:05Z")
> [@Murdockchan](#): > > May I ask as to were there certain reasons to Charles being rather cold towards the MC? Cause they’re not Richard lol ---
**Author:** ![NutellaQueen](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/nutellaqueen/32/34552_2.png) [@NutellaQueen](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/NutellaQueen)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:27pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/30 "2021-03-14T18:27:04Z")
> [@anon57188313](#): > > In the current demo though, the option to choose who you have feeling for is grayed out after you’ve already picked one Yes, it will be different in the final version. > [@Murdockchan](#): > > May I ask as to were there certain reasons to Charles being rather cold towards the MC He was cold towards all his children except Richard. > [@Murdockchan](#): > > Also was it intentional for him to choose a brown mare for him instead of letting him to choose? He didn’t let any of his heirs to choose their horse. He picked them himself. Their colors have different meanings, which you will understand better in full game. ---
**Author:** ![Murdockchan](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/murdockchan/32/274611_2.png) [@Murdockchan](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Murdockchan)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:29pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/31 "2021-03-14T18:29:29Z")
> [@NutellaQueen](#): > > He was cold towards all his children except Richard. Because of what? To the fact that they were not Queen Isabelle’s children by birth and by blood? I wonder how he would react to the MC being chosen as King/Queen, instead of Richard? > [@NutellaQueen](#): > > Their colors have different meanings, which you will understand better in full game. May I ask to if that’s the case, would you think it to be a good idea to have the brown horse to be either having a coat that is bright bay, almost red? Since when you put it that way, it sound rather similar to the four horsemen in the Bible. ---
**Author:** ![Sakinah\_Saraswati](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sakinah_saraswati/32/118835_2.png) [@Sakinah\_Saraswati](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Sakinah_Saraswati)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:31pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/32 "2021-03-14T18:31:25Z")
Oh yes of course. I feel stupid just thinking about it. Thank you for answering \>:) ---
**Author:** ![Omnidroid](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/omnidroid/32/93707_2.png) [@Omnidroid](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Omnidroid)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 6:49pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/33 "2021-03-14T18:49:50Z")
Hey. Nice game. It had a few grammatical errors, nothing major. The 2nd paragraph after you choose your first name and the pages after that. ---
**Author:** ![TheBlackSamourai](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/theblacksamourai/32/104383_2.png) [@TheBlackSamourai](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/TheBlackSamourai)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 7:23pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/34 "2021-03-14T19:23:07Z")
welcome back!! And good luck with this one. ---
**Author:** ![Waffles95](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/waffles95/32/110620_2.png) [@Waffles95](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Waffles95)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 7:31pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/36 "2021-03-14T19:31:34Z")
I really enjoyed your demo and welcome back! I wish you good luck with the game :3 ---
**Author:** ![Mango\_Pirate](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/mango_pirate/32/164510_2.png) [@Mango\_Pirate](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Mango_Pirate)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 7:55pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/37 "2021-03-14T19:55:23Z")
Hi, nice to see another WIP from you 😀 Do you have a website or a blog? ---
**Author:** ![Jackpot1776](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jackpot1776/32/128171_2.png) [@Jackpot1776](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Jackpot1776)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 8:02pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/38 "2021-03-14T20:02:42Z")
I’m super excited you decided to keep writing! If I lost all my files, I don’t know if I’d keep writing… But you did! And this one sounds amazing so far! Best of luck 🥰 ---
**Author:** ![Murdockchan](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/murdockchan/32/274611_2.png) [@Murdockchan](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Murdockchan)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 8:04pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/39 "2021-03-14T20:04:13Z")
Looks like that both Queen Isabelle and Queen Avelina holds a serious grudge against each other, especially over who’s gonna be chosen by the sword. I wonder what happened before then? Did Avelina did something to cause Isabelle to become barrened or something else happened? ---
**Author:** ![XaosMinion](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/xaosminion/32/92368_2.png) [@XaosMinion](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/XaosMinion)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 8:14pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/40 "2021-03-14T20:14:05Z")
I think mother dearest poisoned her when she was pregnant. ---
**Author:** ![IronRaptor](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ironraptor/32/199092_2.png) [@IronRaptor](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/IronRaptor)\ **Post date:** [March 14, 2021, 8:15pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496/41 "2021-03-14T20:15:26Z")
I like this better than your previous work. Someone already touched on the poly question (hard to choose one) however is the game supposed to end if you become king or will there be more coming? Also, when I see “combat” in the stats I think tactics instead of hand-to-hand. One other thing that feels a bit off is age. Especially when Clara’s in the mix. What is the age difference among the siblings? [Previous page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496.md?page=1) [Next page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-sword-of-rhivenia-book-one-check-3830/96496.md?page=3)