The Shadow Society (WIP) Rheylo short "Christmas fluff" story on #1270 (11/2 - 19)

nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice
modern-fantasy

#1276

Aw, that means so much! I’m happy you’re looking forward to it :smile:


#1277

New board for G

I decided to remake the board I made for G some time ago, mainly due to the fact that the eyes/face parts had very light skin whilst G is described to be “deeply tanned” (if I remember my won writing correctly lmao). I found new faces but had to alter their skin tone, hair colour etc. plus I wanted to make the eyes shine a bit more (: hope you like it!


#1278

Surprise! Chapter 6 is now released as part of the demo.

I wanted to give everyone a little surprise. Hope you all will enjoy the sixth chapter of TSS~


#1279

Greatest surprise ever!

rushes to play the demo


#1280

I am getting a bug when I choose ‘I won’t need to prepare myself. It’s whoever is in there…’ etc:

chapt1mansion line 310: It is illegal to fall out of a *choice statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.


#1281

error : chapt1mansion line 310: It is illegal to fall out of a *choice statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.

trying to punch azur get me : chapt5escape line 3738: Non-existent variable ‘punchaz’

reloading get me : Uncaught TypeError: Cannot redefine property: BetterJsPop


#1282

Thanks! Those errors should be fixed now.

As for the reloading thing, I have no idea what that even means, but hopefully it’s just a temporary error?


#1283

aren’t we at chapter 11 in the demo? sorry if I’m dense xD


#1284

Um no, I accidentally uploaded chapter 11 and 12 to the demo but while they are displayed there there is nothing inside of the text files :slight_smile: the demo ends at the end of chapter 6.


#1285

Someone on my tumblr requested some Christmas fluff with Rheylo, so here is a (very belated and during a deeper stage of the romance) scene for those interested. Hope you like it!

“Do you know what a mistletoe is?”

The question leaves my mouth as I gaze out over the dark concrete below. Though it’s undoubtedly difficult to keep track of the days here, what with the never rising sun making it impossible to tell day from night, I’ve been doing my best to keep track and been able to determine that Christmas would be just around the corner.

A loud ‘thud’ behind me draws my attention away from the window, my focus settling on the dark haired man keeping me company. Previously he was laying on his back, resting in the bed beneath the slanted ceiling. Now, however, he is in an upright position, clutching his head and mumbling a number of swear words about the construction of this house.

“I’ve no idea”, he says when finally looking up at me, a shade of red creeping into his cheeks. “Wh- um, why would you ask me something like that? Do I look like I know about that stuff?”

I can’t help but frown at his lack of composure. “If you don’t know what it is, then why are you getting upset?”

“I’m not upset!”

Trying best I can not to show my amusement to his outburst, I decide to play along. “A mistletoe is a kind of plant, and it’s tradition to hang it up during a celebration called Christmas. If two people happen to be under it, well…”

I trail off, suddenly feeling somewhat shy. Peeking at Rheylo, I try to read the emotions etched in his face, but he refuses to look at me and keeps his eyes stubbornly glued to the floor.

Something tells me that he does know of this tradition, after all.

“Have you ever done that?” He asks, gripping a piece of hair between his fingers and combing through it in a nervous manner. “I mean, it’s cool if you have, I guess. I wouldn’t do something that stupid, but… yeah, you know.”

“Oh.” My stomach drops at his words, though I’m not sure what I expected. This is Rheylo I’m talking to, after all.

He seems to notice my shift in mood, because he quickly raises his head to look at me. The two, flaming irises burn even brighter when panic consumes his face, and he rushes up to his feet only to yet again hit his head in the low ceiling.

“This fucking- I just mean I wouldn’t just do it with anyone!” He blurts out, rubbing his head and watching me through eyes stained with tears of pain. “Shit, that came out wrong. I meant I wouldn’t do it with just anyone, alright? I’m not like that.”

I stare at him for a moment, unable to hide my surprise at his determination to correct himself. A warm, joyous sensation spreads in my stomach, overtaking the anxiety from before. Before I know it, a smile tugs at the corners of my mouth.

“Noted”, I say.


#1286

the reloading error mean…when I had error 1…and reloaded…I got the 2nd error…


#1287

It was very, very good! I liked all of the LI, you writed them so well! you are doing a really good job, can’t wait to see the final product


#1288

@E_RedMark Well, I hope those errors are fixed now :slight_smile:

@with_diamonds Aah, thank you! That means a lot!


#1289

hey @Carawen…havent been following your thread…due to life and scattered brain lol

but have you got lot done…with the rivalery path ?

also…you hoarding all the vromance to yourself…aint you…:kissing_closed_eyes:

So questions time! Dunno if these been asked before…but bear with meh…

Summary

Azure seem to have ice-cold (personality lol) but powers right? Does her sister have another element kinda of power? and between the 2…me think Azure would be overwhelming right?

Ohh how about Azure and Gwend? I think Gwen have a chance…due to her genius…she probably know any weakness her highness has…right? even if she doesnt have the powers…sometimes brain over power can win…

what about Quarie ? does she have power too? beside the '‘Stare into my eyes and feel like weed man’ lol

and Michaela…poor Michaela…she got the short straw…:rofl:


#1290

@E_RedMark The rival romance won’t start until book 2; in book 1 you build up the rivalry if that’s the path you want to take. Same with the friendship-romance; you build up the friendship in book 1, and get the option to take it a step further in book 2.

I included these for those who like more personal development rather than a love at first meeting kinda thing :slight_smile: if you want to experience romance in book 1, though, you have to go with the “normal” romantic options.

A does have powers connected to ice, yes, and R’s ability is revealed if you spent time with them and they are the one to come and save you. The nature of the abilities is a bit spoilery so I can’t comment more on that at the moment.

Are you thinking about who is strongest, or?

I can’t outright say which ability everyone has, since for G and Q that would be spoilery. And M does have another kind of significance in the story besides being from another world :wink:


#1291

well yeah…no…I know all of that! lol

It just was playing the demo again…for fun . And was thinking that so far…it seem like A…pretty much is pulling a Madara there XD As in…freaking overwhelm everyone when it come to power . Or…is her sister…just as strong?

I mean in a make belief…combat only…who would win ? I’m just curious…cose I usually dont care about such a thing…but here…I was thinking…if it came down to blow…especially…btw…I’m babbeling I know…but I DO love how its different between the 2…like if I pick R first and then A…R…pretty much just like give up…(I’m So butthurt)…so…though…let see if it I pick A first…then R second…and its DIFFERENT! LIKE OMG YA ARE A GENIUS! :rofl:

honestly…I told you this before…I dont do rivalery usually…but you writing them in such a delicious way…I gotta try them at least once…and yes…my favorite showdown is so far still between G and A…it should be electric to say the least…

blurring…uh…just to be safe…lol