The Seventeenth Spy (WIP, on hiatus. Story last updated 9-30-17, codex added 12-27-17)

MC: 47, 49, 56, 40, 0, 48 - 26

Chapter 1: 4, 75, 1

Chapter 2: Eli, merchant, Hespera, unknown

Relationships: 61, 50, 36

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Thanks! I though that’d be an easy way to get an idea of how people are playing without making endless polls. :blush:

@Alexandra

Summary

Is “[star]” and “[planet]” supposed to be like that?


I don’t think the quotation mark should be there.


This are what I got:
MC: 63, 25, 78, 49, 3, 44 - 20

Chapter 1: 4, 79, 1

Chapter 2: Twelve, merchant, Nephele, unknown

Relationships: 59, 48, 33


That aside, I really like how this are so far, keep up the good work :smile: my question is, can mc betray this organization?(I probably miss/forgot the name of the organization :sweat_smile:)

well I choose to just call him Twelve since he still no one to me, it’s may or may not change though

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Well, that’s embarrassing… :flushed:
I drafted it like that until I’d decided on names and totally forgot about it

Yes, you will be able to betray them, there just won’t be an opportunity until you’re finished with training. My draft right now for your final thoughts about joining AGIS looks like this:

#This is exciting. I get to be a spy?
#I’m not sure I’m cut out for this. It’s a lot of responsibility.
#I’ll be proud to serve the Coalition, be a part of something bigger.
#This is terrifying. I feel trapped. If I don’t say yes, I’m sure they’ll kill me.
#I hate what AGIS stands for, but this is an opportunity to strike a blow from the inside

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I probably going to choose either of this :laughing:

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Here’s mine
MC: 21, 50, 11, 28, 1, 55 - 26

Chapter 1: 3, 27, 1

Chapter 2: Twelve, mercenary, Nephele, unknown

Relationships: 63, 50, 29

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Fixed the two things @Vattena found, thanks

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Interesting so far :smiley:

MC: 53, 51, 54, 82, 0, 48 - 20

Chapter 1: 4, 82, 1

Chapter 2: Eli, astrographer, Hestia, estranged

Relationships: 59, 50, 36

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MC: 41, 37, 14, 26, 3, 47 - 18

Chapter 1: 3, 39, 1

Chapter 2: Twelve, mercenary, Hespera, estranged

Relationships: 62, 48, 29

I got a lil bit worried when I ripped a hole in space and time… but I do love achievements…

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MC: 75, 23, 28, 30, 2, 43 - 32

Chapter 1: 3, 35, 1

Chapter 2: Twelve, smuggler, Hespera, estranged

Relationships: 57, 50, 33

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I was wondering if anyone would find that! I’m curious, was it by accident or intentional pun?

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Accidental. Although I’ll be doing it every time from this point on :smile: I don’t want to say what It is cause I feel entitled knowing :laughing:

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Well, there are actually two versions

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Well then there’s more achievements for me to aim for… :smile:

This is mine so far:
MC: 39, 53, 39, 7, 0, 52 - 18

Chapter 1: 3, 62, 2

Chapter 2: Twelve, mercenary, Nephele, unknown

Relationships: 59, 50, 32

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Here I am, I guess:

MC: 49, 43, 87, 34, 3, 48 - 20

Chapter 1: 2, 46, 2

Chapter 2: Kim, astrographer, Nephele, unknown

Relationships: 57, 50, 36

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MC: 43, 65, 55, 42, 1, 54 - 20

Chapter 1: 4, 67, 1

Chapter 2: Eli, astrographer, Hespera, unknown

Relationships: 65, 50, 29


I didn’t find the line-by-line dialogue annoying, the writing and everything was actually pretty good! :slight_smile: Keep it up.

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MC: 25, 58, 41, 64, 2, 47 - 18

Chapter 1: 3, 69, 1

Chapter 2: Elijah, mercenary, Galene, dead

Relationships: 64, 48, 29

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MC: 33, 57, 53, 62, 2, 48 - 26

Chapter 1: 3, 57, 1

Chapter 2: Twelve, astrographer, none, unknown

Relationships: 59, 50, 36


I don’t understand what it means.

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This was really well written! I got so immersed in the game that I didn’t even notice when the demo ended at first. I also really liked that you didn’t have to have a home planet/moon.

Don’t know what these mean but it said to post them so here you go!:
MC: 41, 54, 66, 69, 2, 44 - 20

Chapter 1: 3, 31, 1

Chapter 2: Twelve, astrographer, none, unknown

Relationships: 55, 48, 33

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