The Seven Winds (WIP)

@stsword Once you have a working magic system with powerful effects, you won’t have a fantasy-type campaign any longer- because of Clarke’s Third Law.

@Talon5505 No, I meant the last side-quest for Part 3. There’s still 3 more Parts after this to go.

@Havenstone, @Shoelip Can a perfect being create imperfection? Why not? Perfection is eternal. That’s a common saying. It’s also static… boring. Imperfect beings evolve, imperfect beings are interesting… If I were a perfect being (lol), that’s what I would want to see.

I don’t think I’ve mentioned Hell; I doubt I will, because it wouldn’t add anything to the story, imo. Other more amusing alterations are present in the story to show it isn’t the ‘real’ world: the world is flat, according to the jinn, for one.

@tenryu Lol I had thought the jinn mentioning the earth was flat was your kind of tongue in cheek way of pointing out the thoughts of people around that time in history. Kind of an interesting thought if it’s true…Is the earth also the center of the universe (literally and figuratively) ? Would make sense in this case since God has Man as the most important creatures.

i have a crazy enough imagination while reading a plain book , dear god the things i would see when i read one of those…

what if the world is really the center of the universe… And the sun is just the god Rah sitting with buzz lightyear having a tea party… We are all just 1d things on a piece of paper playing out a script in a really bad sitcom… While dolphins have us locked up in suspended animation so we all share the same dream and we all believe this is reality while dolphins harvest our internal organs to sacrifice to the krakken so the krakken will get fat enough for thanksgiving… And what if the easter bunny is really the easter mouse… Santa is actually skinny…

Oh Tenryu, if there’s an underwater battle can we use shapeshifting to turn into a humongous Mantis Shrimp?

They punch so hard they boil water. It’d be like if someone had to ask you how you like your steak cooked before punching a cow in the face.

@Sarsmos Well, it’s funny either way (which is a plus for me), but I did mean it to be true. The celestial mechanics are unclear to me atm (meaning there’s been no reason for me to work them out), so how the Celestial Court, the mortal world, and the Realm of Light are connected is currently unknown.

@stsword I would love to have an underwater battle because the mastery of the shapeshifting Art is underpowered atm, but sadly all the action seems to be on dry land so far. I remember reading about that when I was researching animals with weird and wonderful abilities. They punch so fast and hard they actually cause plasma to form or something. I did want to use one of them somewhere…

@stsword, @Roslyn_samalt06, @Talon5505 Lol at the discworld references. I keep meaning to pick one of them up, but for some reason I could never get into them. Guess I’m more into serious fantasy/sci-fi books.

Updates of previous Parts and Part 3 Alpha of A Jinni of the Seven Winds now available at:
http://tenryu.fhost.com.au/wind/mygame/index.html
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19684991/web/mygame/index.html

Added the last side-quest, the first bits of the jinni romances (well, just initial conversations) and some continuation bits. It ends when you get to Solomon’s birthday or the city choices.

You have the chance to tell me if there’s anything specific you would like to ask Vineah or Samodai, or if you feel their personalities could be improved.

I got another placeholder instead of my title in the new bits.

Rayim, the proud one, demands the proper respect!   :)

Okay, tenryu, while it’s not applicable to most of my playthroughs, but something the MC might ask their fellow djinni is what being a member of their tribe would be like, what their place would be if they joined the tribe. Rival, right hand djinni, consort, warrior queen, advisor?

@Tenryu, how do you gain mastered arts, i know one way is to talked to the pillar but otherwise, I’ve got nothing

Seriously, Mig, you would know the answer to that if you just looked at the previous page.

I am a Muslim and I should know about Jinn because they are in Islam. Jinn are creatures with free will made from smokeless fire. What a christian may call a DEMON e.g. Lucifer

@stsword Mantis Shrimps taste good. Turning into anything that tastes good would be, in my opinion, a bad decision. Besides, I thought shapeshifting is limited to size. Turning into a giant shrimp wouldn’t seem to adhere to that idea. Or would it? Because technically I can control what I shapeshift into… So, could I turn into a demon if I felt like it?

Wyrmspawn, Tenryu never said that you can’t change forms and manipulate your size at the same time.

So as far as I can tell there’s nothing stopping the MC from turning into a spider the size of a horse

There seems to be a bug. With the accomplishment of the 4th Task, it says my existence is still intact, yet before that, even after immediately wining against Vineah with the 7th Art, Existence still drops to blemished.

I leave for 2 months, 2 MONTHS! And all of these comments pile up outta nowhere!

I’d like to ask samodai if he likes me cause come on u seduce him in the first place if u are the ardent one

@tenryu I also found another bug. When listing my accomplishments it says that I “Created the wisdom of Solomon for the betterment of mortal man.” in place of what I think should have been the line for creating the Torch.

@stsword Fixed a bunch of these, even in the old scenes. Very weird my last search didn’t find them, but I think I’ve found them all this time. I’ll add some more about the marut and ifrit tribes.

@MIGhunter You need to raise a stat to a particular level (80, well, 81 really) to master the Art. Do this by choosing to use the Art when you have the chance and choosing the appropriate (im)moral options in the game. Qutub allows you to master an Art with a stat 10 points lower.

@SmartKid737 I’ve drawn a lot from both the Islamic and Abrahamic faiths as part of the background of the story. In particular, the powers of the jinn closely resemble what they are reputedly able to do in the Islamic faith. Note the jinn are not demons in the game, but given free choice by God, some have become evil.

@Wyrmspawn, @stsword A jinni can alter the size of the animal form, but there is an upper limit. I guess the plate-sized spider is probably the upper limit. On the other hand, you retain superior strength in animal form no matter the size, so size isn’t everything.

@Gadriel Hmm, I’ve looked at the code a lot and cannot find the problem. Where you can achieve an instant win against Vineah, it really should not result in a wound. The only possibility is if you choose a different Art first before resorting to the instant win. I’ll have to test it more.

@trollhunterthethird I like it. :slight_smile:

@Blackheart I’ll add this in the later conversations.

@Sarsmos Thank you. Fixed.

Well, I have masteries of the 3rd and 6th Arts when I face Vineah. I do not know if that might be part of the problem. My Vanity is at 80, and when I go immediately for using the 7th Art, I also attain the mastery. Also, in the instant win case, the text states that you are both utterly unruffled and bruised. I hope that helps.