On Prologue II , the following sentence is incorrect:
Serenity asks you unamused. The woman glances down at the sword at her sword,
but otherwise looks calm.
I think it should be:
Serenity asks you unamused. The woman glances down at the sword pointed at her throat,
but otherwise looks calm.
Note that you don’t mention Serenity drawing her sword and pointing it at Artemis, merely gripping the hilt (just for the sake of immersion in the story).
The picture detailing the document of the bones of Sonder isn’t displaying (broken picture link in chrome haven’t tested other browsers).
@AStraali Thank you for that, that has been fixed, and sorry for the late reply there turned out to be a lot more bugs in that file, it’s a surprisingly large file making bug hunting… difficult.
@Nogon How strange, I could have sworn that was what it had said once before. All fixed now. As for the Bones of Sonder, that image has been removed as has all the others. I’ll see to bringing them all back when I can, but with the need to break the images into code before putting them in, it has become increasingly difficult.
as for the immersion part i was talking about it seems that you did point it out in the first paragraph, my excuses there.
seems to be working although i think an unfortunate ending bracket snuck it’s way in the following text, when you ask sergeant sebastian why he wants to become a paragon:
I want paragon-ship under you for the simple reason that it is from your[/] military leaders that my troubles derive from."
also after taking the cunning option of selecting sebastian as paragon:on the second screen after i get the following message on the page " 0_9_keep " with the next button available and working, something seems to be missing or a bad calling argument there ?
@Nogon And that was just there to keep track of which scene I was on/section. All is well now, should have been kept hidden, but ah. Thanks for the notes, I look forward to your future patronage.
I liked the demo in fact loved it but for how long it is (and probably will be) I’m guessing ur gonna want to add some sort of checkpoint so people can get back to certain parts I died constantly with that unknown guard before I got the right choices and I was fine with it. What I wasn’t fine with was having to start all over to get to that point it takes a little while, so could you add an option that when someone dies they can go back to a certain check point or something? Cause that’s gonna get annoying when it gets even longer.
@Roxythesilverfox Sorry that happened to you, murder can be a harsh thing, especially on your first da- hour on the job. Anyhow, I hadn’t thought the game was as big as it was. I believe my next objective will be adding a save system to the game
However be warned it’s a complex thing to work with especially when working with the design I’m using, so it’ll be a few days till up to a week till. Full schedule on the side.
Thanks :3 that would be helpful and it’s not long but there’s quite a big mass of information after awhile ur just tapping next constantly just to get where u were before (lucky me I can remember what choices I made XD)
@Roxythesilverfox Impressive o.o But you my friend, have convinced me. I shall be sure to push it up on my priority list. Honestly I rather face all the armies of the surrounding lords with all but a single blade from my family heirloom, and the heartache from betrayal of my advisers, unprepared, but with no solution but the sadness of the need to execute them for their crimes. All this rather than code in a save system… okay probably not.
NOTICE: Saving occurs at times of rests, breaks in the story so not to break immersion, therefore several chapters would be skipped over. I tend to go back a lot and change the story so you might miss a few things, (Not completely important or game changing probably, but this is a W.I.P. and exist for feedback) Along those lines is a warning, this is a save system, it is-was difficult putting in and is delicate, I do need to run tests on the game and that means “turning off” the save system so it doesn’t interfere, which may or may not affect your saves. Also note that this is a W.I.P. the game is constantly being updated, so that may also affect your saves, use at your own discretion.
Oh and I was only able to check to see if the game would run with the save system, which it is, however I’m not sure if it will continue working to the end of the demo completely. If the game crashes at the second save/an error comes up do let me know. Otherwise it should be smooth sailing and you should get the end of demo congratulation message
Yayyy update!! I really enjoyed the demo, can’t wait to see chapter 1!
Sebastian Is indeed an interesting character, I really want to know more about his past and his relashionship with Serenity.
Speaking of which when you ask him questions, when you first meet him, he continues to repeat the same thing after every answer (something along the lines of " Ask what you will of me? I can send you a screenshot if you prefer).
Also i chose “Soldier” as my background/past, shouldn’t I be able to choose the option to tell Sebastian “From soldier to soldier…”, when he first introduce himself
Furthermore instead of Guardman you wrote “guardmen” when you “introduced” the guard who announce Overseer Rolo and the guard that comes to talk to you with the doctor in the council room
And finally:
@eVe Fixes have been made. Although the last error… that’s worrisome. I thought I had that fixed, it’s where the save system was put in, I’ve done all I can and simply can’t find anything else wrong with it, though that error was something I was notified sometime ago. How old is that screenshot?
The demo was gone, I believe up till… 5 hours ago? Which was fixed then. Sorry bout that, accidentally deleted the files (So glad I didn’t clean out my trash can right away ) , you can thank your local hero for notifying me via email else that would have been the end of that legacy .
So! If you don’t get past the save + demo end notification, there’s a problem.
@kanani40 Hahaha, thank you very much your love and support is awe-inspiring. In fact as soon as I post this I’m off to continue the tale. I’m glad you like Sebastian Let’s see how much you like him though after… chapter 3 hehe… I have great plans for him.
The story is flowing strong if I can keep it up, I may be able to pop up updates on a weekly basis. Speaking of flowing strong, if feedback continues just as well there won’t be a need to take things to private alpha testing anytime soon.
Oi, Sebastian, Rolo, Serenity, Artemis - can you smell the tension in the air?
@Razgriz lol what can I say, masterful hands refuse to rest on masterful works. On a more literal note, I’m gonna have to do all I can today and tomorrow - rest of the week is occupied outside of these precious war torn lands Update is still planned for Friday.
What do you mean occupied elsewhere? Who said you’re allowed to have a life outside of this? As many of the tyrants that this game is making , would say, “Back to the code mines peasant!” So, out of curiosity what do you intend to patch in for the next update? The Halloween update or did you already get that one in? You don’t require sleep as far as I can tell so I can never tell how much you’re able to do.
I hope to get the Halloween segment in. An update on Sebastian’s mission (Sorry if the mission dialogue hasn’t been added to the game yet… making that a… spoiler…) Along with a completion to the crime scenes… if that hasn’t already been done. I can’t even keep track of what’s what anymore. It’s the code mines I tell ya.
So! Halloween event. Clean up on the current scenes. Completion of current jobs. Then rolling out Chapter 2 which steam rolls the game into the storyline and more faster pace.
Yea… I believe that was it. I added a toilet scene, but I haven’t heard any feedback on it o.o I hope no one flooded it and just wants to keep it a secret…
I’m pretty sure Rolo did. He went in and when he came out water followed him. The kingdom’s engineers were working all night to fix it…they never came out. There’s a strong chance they didn’t make it.
It’ll definitely be interesting to see how that Halloween scene turned out if we’re able to see it Friday. And dang it Arc, that’s why I’m here. So that when things get crazy I can at least keep note of what needs doing. Lol
, i was just pointing it out.
Let’s see how much you like him though after… chapter 3 hehe… I have great plans for him.
masterful hands refuse to rest on masterful works. On a more literal note, I’m gonna have to do all I can today and tomorrow - rest of the week is occupied outside of these precious war torn lands 