The Rise of the Ochita [WIP] CHAPTER 6 NOW OUT (60K WORDS) 30-12-2023

Thank you! I hope it rises to your expectations and you enjoy it!

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@Giorgos_Romosios Hey author i found a error

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So just discovered this and played a few chapters. Enjoying it a lot. The premise and setting are interesting, as said. I love the idea of navigating this time period, while also being a child from a split ancestry. But my only issue is I feel like some things keep being… summarized, rather then see how it specifically plays out.

Like later on when we get captured by the French. There’s a variety of options you can do. I kinda wanted to know more characters in camp with you. One of the options is to talk to the Hagart tribe, an enemy tribe who allied with the French. I thought I was going to talk with some NPCs or so, but it’s just wrapped in a sentence of you talking to them and making discussions. There’s also the choice of escaping when the opportunity comes or staying with Melanie when she questions you, and I was curious and picked the latter. I was a bit disappointed though when I saw there’s no dialogue or reaction, as the story said you stayed and that was that rather then hearing how Melanie would react. Things like that. So perhaps some more dialogue would be cool.

Also I got an error when I clicked the boiling oil option, which froze it for me.

Otherwise, I do look forward to more, and am keeping an eye out for updates.

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Thank you! I will look into it today and update!

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Thank you for your kind words! I will look into it today!

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The error in the code for both of you should now be fixed! Please let me know if you still encounter it! Also, has the last page been playable for you or does the screen gets stuck loading?

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@Giorgos_Romosios After leading the french to finish the british and learning of mc dad passing away and melanie coming to mc the screen was just stuck loading when i tried to press next

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Yes that’s it…I don’t know what is causing it. The game freezes one page before the end of the chapter. It could either be the browser’s cache that needs to be cleared or playing from a save from a previous version ( not the latest corrected update) or something that I do wrong. I will look into it and try to figure out what it is

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I think I may have sorted it out. I added a page break between the last page and the end of chapter code. Try now, it will hopefully be fixed as well! And thanks again for your feedback

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no probs and I love the story

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@Giorgos_Romosios another error just popped up

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Should be all right now!

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Thank you author, I just played the chapter now there is no errors :yum: :yum: :yum: and sorry for annoying you with them

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Are you kidding? I should be thanking you for pointing out the bugs, you re not annoying me at all! Thank you for your good words. A new poll is coming soon.

Stay tuned!!!

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Will there be fun stuff like scalp swimming?

So, I have created a Tumblr page for the game. It occured to me that many of you are using thatp latform and may prefer to send in your questions, suggestions, messages and experiences there!

Here is the linik, which has also been updated on the original topic.

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Time for our first poll after the release of Chapter 5! Spoilers ahead!

For those of you who stayed with the French at the previous chapter. Did you defend Montreal or was Jacob Smith’s arrival enough to convinve you to betray your French allies?

  • I defended it
  • I secretly plotted with the British
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Results so far show that most of you who switched sides during this war, remained faithful to the French cause…Maybe your affection for Melanie or Gaston had something to do with this…Next question…Did you try to approach the Hagots through Pieskaret or decided it would be best to keep your distances to your auld foes?

  • Approached them
  • Kept away from them
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Hello everyone! Progress report for Chapter 6!
Writing has started and the chapter is around 20 per cent completed. Slowly but steadily we are getting there. My plan is for the game to have a total of 9-10 chapters depending on how the ending is going to be.

On your feedback, there were many of you who asked to be taken back to the village and explain every day life and history of the tribe a little bit more. And so, listening to you, its time for you to go back and return after everything that has happened. But how safe is it now that Sagoyewatha is back as well? Can the Shaman give you any advice or explain your omens? Will you choose to face Sagoyewatha before his reign of terror escalates or wait? As always your choices will pave the way for the future of the whole tribe…

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This seems like a really interesting story, I’m surprised I never saw it around until now. Kind of hits home because my family is all Sioux and lives up in North Dakota, and our last name is French lol.

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