here i am with some report :
maybe this is just me being nitpicky.. i think you overused the "though" and that make the sentences sounds awkward. how about removing one of them like this : "For now you have a regular robotic replacement though.
Though the enhanced strength from it could be considered a big upside, though it still sometimes lags behind your other motions."
again, this is me being annoying.. how about deleting the latter, so it will be something like this : 'thinking about it brings
with it several emotions bla bla bla.."
sound a bit weird there.. how about something like this : "He says (comma)
he his smile widening as he pours you a drink. bla bla bla.."
should it be "an" before exit strategy ? cmiiw, im not really sure, my grammar kinda sucks sometimes
and i noticed that my MC had no interaction with the other guard (Jacob) yet..eventhough we are supposed to be in the same room, did he avoid the MC ?!