The Operative: Fires of Revolution (Scifi WIP) (Updated 12/17/2018)(Question for readers post 732)

How many operatives defected/deserted during the great war and are their any of them left alive ? I am assuming that operators can’t retire.

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There are a few around.

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“You ‘sight’, shaking your head.”

Shouldn’t this be sigh instead of sight?

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Yep lol

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Is there any point in the story that mc might break down mid combat or random times, that will inhibit his combat. I would assume mc has some form of PTSD .

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Hey there! I stumbled upon this today and I think it seems really cool! Everything you’ve set up so far, from the exposition to the hints of backstory to the present events, are really engaging and flow together really nicely. I can’t wait to see how this pans out. I also want to put in a quick comment on how cool your armour descriptions are! My favourite one is the “strike terror” one. The logical part of my brain was telling me to go for a more practical option but the possible drama… the flair… a cape… that kickbutt helmet design… I couldn’t resist lol. It’s probably a bit of a ridiculous point to get hung up on but as an artist I thought they were super cool. Overall, really good so far.

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Aww thank you for the nice feedback! Always love hearing about people experiences with the story so far! :slight_smile:

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Honestly behind on my writing goals this year, hoping to power through. However it looks like a lot of projects will be developing and getting exciting updates all at the same time!
:smirk:

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I’ve just played your game and I really love it. The story seems pretty interesting and characters are well defined. So, good luck on your game! :blush:
My favorite character is Six, it’s a very interesting and I wonder how will be developed along the story. :thinking:

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Aww thanks! If you have any criticism or feedback or just things in the stories world you noticed don’t hesitate to comment if you want. :grin:

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Same here, when I saw the picture on top I thought of the soldier from Wreck it! Ralph! :joy:

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