Can you Incorporate the choice of names and gender in story and give some options for names for people who want to play right away rather than typing anything
When the lady donella said I am very good in swords the was a shock for me and it felt as if I am playing this game with someone elseās body
I mentioned that you will be play as strong warrior.
Is that Intentional? If not itās either That or Thatās
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This interesting so far, so there going to be attack at king absence?
Thank you for fixing my typos 
And yes.
I see, will look forward of how this will goes 
How will you be dictating what is good vs evil? Can we be a relatively peaceful member but maliciously conniving? Yknow, instead of the ol brute evil warrior and all.~ 
MCās evil if they betray the others and be on the enemyās side, break peopleās hearts, kill innocent people etc.
But a bit of prologue would be good.
Oh, sorry I forgot to mention that in the game. My bad.
Canāt wait for more!
This sounds awesome Iām definitely killing Rhona she annoying
This looks interesting so far, but one thing that I would suggest for the basic information such as gender and name is to either make it flow into the story or to do it before the story begins. As it is, it feels weird. You could fit it in with the line beforehand such as āOthers found themselves jealous of theā¦ gender choice who survived the battle. āHey, you know that little -insert gender-ā¦ name choice?ā you heard someone whisper behind youā or something along those lines. I think it would help the flow.
I said it in second post 
but I am glad we share same thoughts
Yes, I just wanted to also suggest a way to fit it in well, incase the author was stuck.
As for other stuff, I also found a oddly worded passage that Iād recommend changing.
Lord Alan has never let you to have dinner with the warrior. He always sees you as a family. Thatās why you eat together with them.
Iād change it to "Lord Alan does not allow you to dine with the warriors. He has always seen you as family. Thatās why you eat with the whatever you call the family, Iām not sure if āroyal familyā would be the correct term.
Nice demo, Im looking forward to see how this progresses.
Iām going to betray the family and kill them hi Augustine haha
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This looks interesting so far.
I havenāt played the demo yet but do we have to be the strongest warrior can we be a mage instead ??? A Archer perhaps just asking 
You know me too well.